Wow... really interesting take on the whole "Pardigim rest" deal that we're left with at the end of the second season... I'm really enjoying this so far and can't wait to see what you come up with next!

I'm wondering if Miss Dorthy is an android still, or if she just kept most of her "robotic" tendencies... and I'm also very interested in seeing where the whole "future-past" history deal your working with here will go...

Please please update soon!!

excellent! I've been waiting for someone to try and write about the events of 40 years ago...

Whoa. This is awesome.

Absoloutely wonderful! Come on Chapter 4! We're waitin' for ya! :) Try listening to the Big O soundtrack while you're reading too, it helps you feel the story

Big O really did turn more metaphysical then Eva' at the end, and this fits the style perfectly.

Wow. Just Wow!

I demand more! This rules! :)

So col!

So he finally got back home. I wonder how he'll get the deal to negotiate to get Dorthy and her boss back...

WOOHOO!
Very freakin' cool! I love the mystery surrounding Dorothy's situation. I love your take on a relationship between Roger and Norman. *huge thumbs up* Fantastic writing talent! Keep up the incredible work!

An interesting beginning.

Wow, now that was very symbolic and spiritual, but to add the Antichrist from the Bible to it? I don't know, still, it was good.

Oh, man, that was a freakin' 10. Just one very spastically heart felt question...you are going to be continuing this...right? Please? For the love of money and pancakes? PLEASE!!?!
Just tell me you're going to continue this thing... Here *hands over a batch of cookies* Now, please..continue? Please?
Kayce

...Wow. This is really good. Can't wait to see what happens next.