this is bloody brilliant i only wish that it was going to be updated at some point but i guess from the timeframe of the last update that this has been discontinued so i'd just like to say it's a fantastic story and i hope one day you feel the urge to finish it

thanks for the good read

rob

no more huh? stinks...wish there was more, but i guess i gotta deal...:(

Phenomenal, stupendous, I can not say enough wonderful things about this story.

Ever gonna post more? Please?

When I started reading this I didn't notice that it wasn't complete and then to get to here and have it not even being worked on for over 3 years, well, I'm just crushed. Crushed I tell you!

Please work on this story and do it soon.

Love your writing style :-)

I love this story and really really hope you are planning to continue it. The characterization and storytelling are spot on and really drew me in and kept me hooked and I think it would be a shame if you left it hanging this way. Please please please! continue this?

I love wee!Jack fics, and this is definitely one of the best I've ever come across. Will it be continued?

this is a great story. :D i've seen stories get updated after longer, and it would be good if this one could be.

its aparent that you wont contniue with this story due to the date you last updated. that is sad coz i was really enjoying your story. hope you update again

I'm definitely interested if you want to update.

This chapter has a lot of question marks after sentences that end with a period. It is very distracting.

Great story, I really enjoy how complex and well you write Jenny and how you portray Jake.

ah! she knows! and her brothers must have been worried about her, update!

Again she does it to me! You must be taking lessons from Spielberg or Lucas I swear... I just keep hitting the button for the next chapter and nothing happens!

OK so now we have another story where everyone is held prisoner... at least Jake and Jenny made it back to the SGC... I still hoping on the other one.

Good story... keep it up

Barb