Hooray a fic about Fawkes, my favorite character! I loved your style of writing- very poetic; and I love Kelvar. Just wondering- how come Fawkes and Kelvar's father wasn't there? Do you imagine the phoenix males not having anything to do with their chicks? Or is he dead?
Anywho, I hope you do continue this fic- I want to see what happens to Elbereth.
Good work here, Myth1. And remeber, I like Ike!!

Really good Story! But, Phoenixes only eat herbs. (Just an FYI for later chapters.) I can't wait to read more.

Hey just found your delightful story i like the Tolkin aspect .

Spiffy idea! very original! I do hope you continue this story!

I absoloutely Loooooovvvee your story. Please Write more pronto!(pronto's my new favorite word)

LOOVE IT it really puts you in fawkes eyes! is that the end??

That was really good... I've always found pheonixs really interesting and its a very origanal idea.

Loved The Story. Write More If You can. Oh and I have a suggestion if you are going to write more. Maybe like Fawkes and Kelver could get the couples together. But thats just my opinion. Any way loved the story. Keep on writing.

I love the story. Write ore if you can.!!!!!!

Loved it. Specially when James starts to sing. THo I can't imagine hime singing. Keep writing!

i liked it, that was very cute and the phoenix was very in character! very original too!

That was a cute story, tho Dumbledore was a bit out of character when he got mad... Also, this paragraph didn't make much sense: "Lord Voldemort is just now gaining power. His name is known throughout the British Isles, even though he is just an upstart now. He will grow powerful soon..." He trailed off. "Lord Voldemort - or Tom Riddle - opened the Chamber of Secrets in his 5th year, and was never able to return to the Light after. In his 6th year, he murdered a girl. He gave false proof later that Rebeus Hagrid had committed the crime. Hagrid had been expelled long before I found out about Riddle and his murder."
It was his 5th year that he killed Myrtle, and Dumbledore knew all along, he just had no proof. Also, I don't know what it is about that paragraph, but somehow the dates seem a bit messed up. Sorry, I always have to give constructive critism! Great story tho, I really liked it! I'm off to chapter two now!

I've read both chapters; I'm reviewing the first one to add it to my favorites. It's definitely worthy, with Fawkes' character written wonderfully.

finding this sequel on the list really made me happy, and i had to read it immediately...basically, same thing as last time - well written, and a good plot...and i still haven't found any other phoenix stories :-)
Keep on writing, please!

Really good!!!!!! I mean REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!! This shows real talent, u should enter a story contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Only a few parts were a bit confusing, but it was amazing!!!