Flawless.

Nothing else to say.

Great dialog. That is exactly how I could see that infamous conversation going. Well done.

Ah, very nice! Your Zoe was perfect and the story made perfect sense. Very nice indeed.

He!! I read it twice, and laughed just as hard (out loud!) both times. Absolutely *hilarious*, and the dialogue-only format works superbly here. I just adore this conversation; in my mind, this will be exactly how it happened. And the serious/somber part was well done too without being overwrought. All in all, fabulous job :) Favorite lines: "He says he loves you for your mind, when what he's really after is my body." and "Well, I'm not quite sure how to take that, there." and "Tell me if I was blind and legless and attacking you, you'd pull a gun while I tried to figure out where I was." ... "You find amputation sexy, sir?" Adding it to my favorites.

I could imagine this definitely happening. I love the dialogue, very good. I should take a few pointers from you.

This was a nice little ficlet. i can so see Mal & zoe having this coversation and Zoe being all stoic and Mal just freaking out. Ahh Damn I miss this show

Real nice! Gawds I love good dialogue! It's amazing how clear a scene like this can be with just the right words. I look forward to reading more of your work.

really, really good. You had the characters down perfect. Except some of Mal's line sounded a bit like something Wash might say.
But no biggie problems.
Elen

This is great, very funny, and very sad. its the sad in it that gets me. Good writing, it takes talent to make an all dialogue peice work as well as this one does.

wow! that was cool. They're charachterizations were right on! (doesn it seem to you like the word charachterizations has way to many letters in it? Seems like it to me) I can see them having that conversation. This is great!

This is *fantabulous* and I loves it, I loevs it so. You've just NAILED the Mal & Zoe dynamic, not to mention done an excellent job of caturping their voices. It reminds me a lot of the scene when mal first shows Zoe "Serenity" in "Out of Gas", and I can completely hear their voices in my mind. Excellent work!

Amazing. This is perfect. It is exactly how I see Mal and Zoe's relationship. They've just been through too much together, are almost of the same mind, that they could never really BE in love. I've never read anything that makes me want to jump up in down for joy in regards to capturing on of my favorite friend relationships in any tv show. Thank you.

nice. I could hear their voices.

nice. I could hear their voices.