Ooh, cool. In the entire time of me reading these things, I've only come across this, once? Eh. Please continue!

Good work! The only real difficult part was in the beginning when you had quotes but didn't say who was talking--thats tricky to follow with new characters. Anyways, omg awexxome!!1!one!

this chapter is good and just for the hell of it I'm going to say this: this story has some Harry Potter connections to it

hey good job!! ^_-
are you a mudshiper? either way it was good. a little more detail.
^_^* but good use of causal adapt behavior.
hope to soon and see alex fall to isaac!
ISAAC ALL THE WAY!

I'm offended that no one has reviewed this yet. It's almost as if the lack of pairings has made it less desirable. Go figure... Also, I found the part with Sheba most amusing. Keep up the OMG AWEXXOME!!1one11! work. ^_^