nice story

Oh my gosh, that's so flippin' sweet! Two pencils for the price of one, rotflol.

omg this is an amazing story!
grah i fell in love with it. ty for writing it!

Loved this little piece. What a terrific, accurate depiction of how Bobby must've been feeling. I actually found this story by accident on someone else's "fav" list...and have gotta add it to mine, too.

Nice writing.

Wow. This piece did an amazing job of capturing the characters of Goren and Eames (especially Goren which is hard to do). Also, I thought it was so cute all the things Goren did to prepare because truthfully I could see him doing it. Not to mention, Eames entering with a snarky remark fit perfectly too. Wonderful job!

I loved it! I especially love Alex's Line: “Wow. What a way to economize. Two pencils for the price of one, huh?” Cute!

The whole thing was sweet/cute.

AW.

I love how you caught Goren's anxiousness, and the way Eames came in with that witty comment was great and in character.

This was short and doubly sweet. It made me giggle. :)

Anticipation was just great- it was sweet and cute and gave some good insight into bobby and how he cares about alex-- thanks

perfect last line!

me loves this!

You capture these small important moments so well. I love this insight into Goren's character. Why-oh-why haven't you written many, many more? You know, just for my entertainment. I've gobbled all the others up!

Loved this. Loved this a lot. Nicely in character.

So cute! I love how when he finally ran out of things to do he resorted to breaking pencils. I can only imagine Eames' amusement.

Oh, this is just lovely. May I have it for Recs Judicata (hamsandwich.topcities.com/recsjudicata) this month? (I can't find an e-mail address, so I figured this was probably the best way to get in touch with you.)

I have one word for you - brilliant!
You captured Goren's anticipation wonderfully in this short piece, as well as his relief that all is well again.
You must write more CI fics!

Another hit, short and very sweet :) Please write more!