Just wanted to let you know this is probably the best casefile story I've ever read, and, beleive me, I've read way too many of them...The characterization was flawless and the plot so interesting...keep up the good work!

Nice story!

I like it so much!

Keep up the good work!

I've been reading along-excellent story, btw. Just thought I would point out a small "pick":
You wrote:
Together with any GSR Grissom was able to collect from the suits they would provide direct evidence that Lowell had fired the gun that had killed Cavrel; the fibers and the DNA were only circumstantial evidence without the direct chain of action leading to the murder.
The truth is, all evidence in a murder case is circumstantial. Only eyewitness statements and confessions from the perpetrator are considered "direct" evidence. Point in fact, you could walk in and see a suspect standing over a dead body with a smoking gun, but as long as no one actually *witnessed* the act occur, it is circumstantial.
I thought that I would also enclose this, from dictionary.com:
Circumstantial evidence (Law), evidence obtained from circumstances, which necessarily or usually attend facts of a particular nature, from which arises presumption. According to some authorities circumstantial is distinguished from positive evidence in that the latter is the testimony of eyewitnesses to a fact or the admission of a party; but the prevalent opinion now is that all such testimony is dependent on circumstances for its support. All testimony is more or less circumstantial. -Wharton.
For any future stories, :) which indeed, I hope to see!

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i know your not do your story but im reviewing so i remember your story!

I'm going to be really undetailed and say...MORE MORE MORE! The tension is killing me! By the way you mis-wrote chapter fifteen, it goes from fourteen to sixteen in the chapter list. Otherwise, MORE MORE MORE!

*shovels popcorn into mouth with amazing speed* This is so fabulous, I'm in, hook line and sinker. You've nailed each character so perfectly, Sara's bitterness, Nick's caution, you put so much detail and description into this that it's impossible not to see it exactly as if it were happening. Bravo.

Really cool. I'm glad they got there in time.

I love how delicately you handled the deafness/disability issue. Your writing is so good, it makes me wish I had written it. Am eagerly anxious to pick up Chapter 3 tomorrow.
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I love some of the adjectives and modifiers you're using. Your verb choice is sometimes unusual as well, which is fabulous. I hate reading the same things over and over. I know I'm only two chaps in, but this is shaping up to be a cut far above the rest...onto Chapter 3!

God, I'm already hooked. I loved how Walter grabbed the umbrella for lack of a better weapon, what a very human reaction. Your attention to detail is excellent. I can't wait to read more...you know I'm the world's biggest dork, too, since that moment will come in about 20 seconds.

Really cool! I'm glad they're gonna get the guy. AND I really hope Nick doesn't screw it up. He really shouldn't call her.

Very very cool! Please please update soon!

I'm really loving this story - you have everyone so true to character, and the crime itself is really interesting. Are you sure you're not a writer for the series? Of course you're not - you're even better than they are. I can't wait to find out what Sara finds at the Bellagio. And Nick seems more than a little interested in Connie, eh? LOL I think you've got the undercurrents between Sara and Grissom down especially well, and your dialogue could come straight from a script. I hope we don't have to wait too long for an update!

O, so good! You've really got Sara's reactions to these cases down. Wow, I'm impressed. Keep up the good work and keep updating!