Hi, this is certainly a very gripping story. It needs to be proofread and corrected for spelling, grammar, and punctuation though. Otherwise, I couldn't tear myself away from it. I think the ideas in it, the plot, the energy with which it is told, are all quite incredible! You seem well talented and full of interesting ideas!

Remember elves can be reembodied

ok this is interesting

Cool chapter! Post 7 soon please! :)

Wow...post more soon please! :)

Lovely story so far and I love how you've dedicated with your daughter! (aww!)
It has a great start-constructive criticism? There were only a few punctuation matters I noticed, but they were so small and your writing was so detailed and vivid that it was merely shadowed.
* I'll be back to read the next chapter, especially to learn of Legolas's secret with the ring of his.
MLynnBloom

this seems like a really good story. not only do you have good writing. but you have legolas in the story!not that theres anything wrong with aragorn, but i like legolas!