Interesting idea. I like it. Catch ya on the flip side.

and a new story. Though I think the plot was a bit weird, Palermo being Victors dad.
Story: - thought out good
- well written
what else is there to say ;)

Whoa, Palermos Victors father? Jeez...Anyway, on the tombstone it says "Antonio Del Toro", but on Rosas birthcertificate it said her brothers name was Anthony Del Toro...Yeah, Im nitpicking...:p I like this story though, interesting and a great plot. Keep making fanfics!

very, very good story. I think that your storyline was very original. keep up the good work. one question, where do you find the time to write so much?

You have no (visible) reviews yet! How evil of people!
Thought it was cute how Palermo is Victor's dad :D I don't think he is THAT old but it worked. So rock on dude.