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Reviews For: By Moonlight

Nytd
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThis one gave me chills! I was always fascinated as a young girl with Captain Hook, and it must have been where my obsession with pirates started.

Lovely piece! I'm off to read the next two.
Dreaming One
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseOh...I like it. I shall read more. ^_^
Sky Girl Butterfly
2007-04-20
ch 1,
abuseWAUW! Love the way you write! And the fic is great, too! Must admit I've never imagined Wendy and Hook together but actually I like the idea.
Verse
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is the first "Peter Pan" fic I have ever read and I am stunned by the beauty of this short piece. Very beautiful, I'm sure I will come back and re-read this often! I have a weakness for good last lines, and you've got a great one here.
Syndromia
2004-11-13
ch 1,
abuseWow, I can't wait to read the other ones, very deep!
Skep
2004-07-17
ch 1,
abuseWonderful, just wonderful. I do like to see people writing about the Hook/Wendy dynamic. And something written by a Jason Isaacs fan, well... :)
Winter Solstice1
2004-06-22
ch 1,
abuseA sleeping Hook is quite a sensual image, and you've captured him perfectly, I absolutely love the way you've described him, cleverly switching the POV over to Wendy.

The way that you select and use words alongside proper punctuation makes your little ficlets very easy to read, and yet there seems to be much more below the surface of them! They are touching, and beautifully written.
Thyme In Her Eyes
2004-05-07
ch 1,
abuseOh, I just don't know what to say. This is lovely. It's strange - I've seen much longer pieces than this and none of them written with such depth, or skill. This is beautiful. Painfully short, though. I found the Wendy/Hook dynamic really interesting and it's great to see someone explore it. I also find your idea very intruiging and I hope that it's all going to lead somewhere. Your writing style is perfect; so simple yet elegant and I love how your descriptions gives and takes from the imagination in fair amounts (loved the closing line, too!). It creates a real sense of atmosphere and character. Both characters were portrayed so well and clearly (Wendy especially); I could see the scene in my head precisely. Please keep up the excellent writing. :) And I totally agree with you on Jason Isaacs... ;)
Drummers
2004-03-24
ch 1,
abuseWow, I could so imagine Wendy dreaming of Hook! I only went to see PP for Captain Jason -- I mean, Captain James Hook!
Thess
2004-03-08
ch 1,
abuseAh Nice. I like how it was written and premise. But is a tinny bit that will trouble that pairing (which I have fancied sometimes). The whole tale is a metaphor. Never Land is Wendy's subconcious and 'Hook' represents her father (which is why was played by the same author *hint*). Just pointing out that. I have no problems with incestous fics, but several fans of the story aren't aware of the true nature. If you know and you are aiming for that. Go ahead with my cheers.
Cmdr. Gabe E
2004-02-20
ch 1,
abusemy god, this is so sweet, beautiful and short :). I really love this! I love how you used wendy's grow-up persona to reflect upon hook. After all, when you're all grown up, you don't look forward to young little boys like peter anymore. I bet she'd want to go back to neverland, but not for peter pan.
Swanheart
2004-01-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good!
Will there be more? I really hope so!
M Jason Isaacs . . . [just leave me to go off into a daydream!]
Rebecca
2004-01-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis story was delightful. The imagery was well used. A well written short story, do you have more in mind?
rain and leaves
2004-01-12
ch 1,
abuseHook/Wendy is squicky, but I like how you've done this . . .
"Just like checking her feet for splinters." Favourite line, lovely, excellent ending.
In short, thanks!
Scarlett Iris
2004-01-12
ch 1,
abuseHee Hee. Jason Isaacs. Hee hee.
There will be a second chapter, won't there? WON'T THERE?! *puupy dog eyes*
Trina
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