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| Narf the Mouse 2006-07-10 ch 2, | abuseWhy do good stories end up on hiatus? Update, please? |
| Indigo Spirit 2004-12-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is rather cool. I like it. |
| dearlady 2004-09-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseoops, dreamlabyrinth pointed out that i didnt translate that last bit in this chapter; “Shafaer, ervorel aussir thurirl. |
| dreamlabyrinth 2004-09-07 ch 2, | abuseWhee, I like that. It's going to be really interesting. Melianthe sounds like a character after my own heart. *gg* But you didn't give us a translation for the last thing she says in chapter 2...? |
| Alexia S. Luclwit 2004-05-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love the language, and the horse fascinates me. Can't wait to meet more characters! |
| Poiniard 2004-02-04 ch 1, | abuseA promising start. Now all it needs is a little conflict/tension. |