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Narf the Mouse
2006-07-10
ch 2,
abuseWhy do good stories end up on hiatus?

Update, please?
Indigo Spirit
2004-12-18
ch 2,
abuseThis is rather cool. I like it.
dearlady
2004-09-07
ch 2, anon.
abuseoops, dreamlabyrinth pointed out that i didnt translate that last bit in this chapter; “Shafaer, ervorel aussir thurirl.
dreamlabyrinth
2004-09-07
ch 2,
abuseWhee, I like that. It's going to be really interesting.
Melianthe sounds like a character after my own heart. *gg*
But you didn't give us a translation for the last thing she says in chapter 2...?
Alexia S. Luclwit
2004-05-24
ch 2, anon.
abuseI love the language, and the horse fascinates me.
Can't wait to meet more characters!
Poiniard
2004-02-04
ch 1,
abuseA promising start. Now all it needs is a little conflict/tension.
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