 Narf the Mouse 2006-07-10 . chapter 2Why do good stories end up on hiatus?
Update, please? |
 Moonjava 2004-12-18 . chapter 2This is rather cool. I like it. |
 dearlady 2004-09-07 . chapter 2 oops, dreamlabyrinth pointed out that i didnt translate that last bit in this chapter; “Shafaer, ervorel aussir thurirl. |
 dreamlabyrinth 2004-09-07 . chapter 2Whee, I like that. It's going to be really interesting.
Melianthe sounds like a character after my own heart. *gg*
But you didn't give us a translation for the last thing she says in chapter 2...? |
 Alexia S. Luclwit 2004-05-24 . chapter 2 I love the language, and the horse fascinates me.
Can't wait to meet more characters! |
 Poiniard 2004-02-04 . chapter 1A promising start. Now all it needs is a little conflict/tension. |