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snuffernosegary5
2006-05-16
ch 1,
abuse"'You thought that maybe I felt the same way.'
'Yes,' he answered quietly, realizing that she had essentially ensnared him with his own words." This made me scream for joy! The whole story would make a fantastic episode, with a compelling plot that doesn't overshadow the characters. A work of art, all of it. Thank you for this story!
Nerwen Aldarion
2004-10-02
ch 1,
abuseYou Rock, If only that was an episode, and I love how Geek Love was compared to a fire, because that what it is a fire that is getting kindled with each new hint
Brelli
2004-08-15
ch 1,
abuseI've got one word for you: wow!. The imagery you create is amazing. I was completely drawn in. Fire is such a great representaion for passion. I was blown away by this
Pheo
2004-07-31
ch 1,
abuseWow!! A magnificent piece of art, as usual. I have to admit, I've read this one about three or four times. It's soo good. I love the parallel between the arson and GSR; you always weave that so well. God, you're just such a great writer!
tismeiam
2004-07-15
ch 1,
abuseWOW... what a story, it has me reading from start to finish with a dopey look on my face. i loved the way you complimented the fire with the sex... i have read csi fanfic with sex in it which is really explitic, but this was done in such a really nice way. Can't wait to read the next one
niff74
2004-01-18
ch 1,
abuseEven though you've managed yet again to leave me speechless, I must show at least *some* gratitude by posting a review, so here goes... ;)
I honestly don't know how you keep doing this, but yet again, you've excelled yourself. I smiled, frowned, almost cried, and even whimpered throughout this wonderful journey you took our geeks through. As always, perfectly in character, smiles, thorns angst and happiness, all packed into one amazing fic. I find it hard to *connect* to fics after "butterflied", because it was so intense, but this was just perfect.
Oh, hell. I'm gonna read it again now. ;)
Grissom's Girl
2004-01-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseUh... wow. What more can I say? I loved how you drew a parallel between Grissom's passion and the intensity of the flame - between investigator and arsonist. He may well become overwhelmed by the fire, but oh what a way to go, eh? This was an incredible piece of work. Thank you for posting it.
scigeek
2004-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! The real details and facts you put into your stories helps make them come alive. The personal parts of the story are nicely put together.
frmarks
2004-01-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou really know how to write a story! Everything about it was perfect.
Quacks
2004-01-14
ch 1,
abuseHot Damn! :P
Barkers Cat
2004-01-14
ch 1,
abuseBurked, you are simply one of the best writers in all of fan fiction. Your talent is outstanding.
This story is a perfect demonstration of that skill. You weave the elements of the case with the G/S deftly. The parallels you use are wonderful.
You make the characters seem "real"; they share more than the names of their TV counterparts. You have their personalities and traits captured perfectly.
WackJob
2004-01-14
ch 1,
abuseYou're a great writer. The way you write Grissom is so good.
Stunning use of fire in this story.
jenny-o
2004-01-14
ch 1,
abuseDamn! This is so good. Wish I had a fireplace.
And Grissom.
mossley
2004-01-14
ch 1,
abuseThis story absolutely rocked! ;-) The use of imagery was inspired, not to mention sensual.
The way you tied in the arson case to the GSR was great. Grissom's dialogue with Tommy was a wonderful way for him to let Sara know his feelings.
Another classic!
Newland5X
2004-01-14
ch 1,
abuseWoo-Hoo!
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