 snuffernosegary5 2006-05-16 . chapter 1"'You thought that maybe I felt the same way.'
'Yes,' he answered quietly, realizing that she had essentially ensnared him with his own words." This made me scream for joy! The whole story would make a fantastic episode, with a compelling plot that doesn't overshadow the characters. A work of art, all of it. Thank you for this story! |
 Nerwen Aldarion 2004-10-02 . chapter 1You Rock, If only that was an episode, and I love how Geek Love was compared to a fire, because that what it is a fire that is getting kindled with each new hint |
 Brelli 2004-08-15 . chapter 1I've got one word for you: wow!. The imagery you create is amazing. I was completely drawn in. Fire is such a great representaion for passion. I was blown away by this |
 Pheo 2004-07-31 . chapter 1Wow!! A magnificent piece of art, as usual. I have to admit, I've read this one about three or four times. It's soo good. I love the parallel between the arson and GSR; you always weave that so well. God, you're just such a great writer! |
 tismeiam 2004-07-15 . chapter 1WOW... what a story, it has me reading from start to finish with a dopey look on my face. i loved the way you complimented the fire with the sex... i have read csi fanfic with sex in it which is really explitic, but this was done in such a really nice way. Can't wait to read the next one |
 niff74 2004-01-18 . chapter 1Even though you've managed yet again to leave me speechless, I must show at least *some* gratitude by posting a review, so here goes... ;)
I honestly don't know how you keep doing this, but yet again, you've excelled yourself. I smiled, frowned, almost cried, and even whimpered throughout this wonderful journey you took our geeks through. As always, perfectly in character, smiles, thorns angst and happiness, all packed into one amazing fic. I find it hard to *connect* to fics after "butterflied", because it was so intense, but this was just perfect.
Oh, hell. I'm gonna read it again now. ;) |
 Grissom's Girl 2004-01-15 . chapter 1 Uh... wow. What more can I say? I loved how you drew a parallel between Grissom's passion and the intensity of the flame - between investigator and arsonist. He may well become overwhelmed by the fire, but oh what a way to go, eh? This was an incredible piece of work. Thank you for posting it. |
 scigeek 2004-01-15 . chapter 1I loved this! The real details and facts you put into your stories helps make them come alive. The personal parts of the story are nicely put together. |
 frmarks 2004-01-14 . chapter 1 You really know how to write a story! Everything about it was perfect. |
 Quacks 2004-01-14 . chapter 1Hot Damn! :P |
 Barkers Cat 2004-01-14 . chapter 1Burked, you are simply one of the best writers in all of fan fiction. Your talent is outstanding.
This story is a perfect demonstration of that skill. You weave the elements of the case with the G/S deftly. The parallels you use are wonderful.
You make the characters seem "real"; they share more than the names of their TV counterparts. You have their personalities and traits captured perfectly. |
 WackJob 2004-01-14 . chapter 1You're a great writer. The way you write Grissom is so good.
Stunning use of fire in this story. |
 jenny-o 2004-01-14 . chapter 1Damn! This is so good. Wish I had a fireplace.
And Grissom. |
 mossley 2004-01-14 . chapter 1This story absolutely rocked! ;-) The use of imagery was inspired, not to mention sensual.
The way you tied in the arson case to the GSR was great. Grissom's dialogue with Tommy was a wonderful way for him to let Sara know his feelings.
Another classic! |
 Newland5X 2004-01-14 . chapter 1Woo-Hoo! |