This cracked me up. Do more. Lol.

I like the whole lay out of the chapter
please more

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Haha, this was excellent. Deliciously in character right through to the end. I'm so glad there's a good piece on here involving this pairing. :)

-FP

lol that was funny, and good. There should be more Okage fics out there like this.

Oh, that was awesome! I fell out of my chair laughing, that was so like Stan. Flawlessly executed.

Quite a twist! =D It's a great one-shot.

aw...plz continue cuz this is really cute!

u did What i hoped for! THANK YOU!

update soon,animaeGuRl ;3

Yes! I hope to be as good as a writer as you! I might just start to write StanxRosalyn at this rate. Wonderful fanfic!!

That was the best damned thing I have read in quite a while.

"Boku to Maoh" is one of my favorite games, so it pleases me to see its growing fanbase. In addition, Rosalyn (I believe it is "Rosalie" in the original Japanese version) and Stanley are my favorite pairing in the game, so I applaud your efforts.
Aside from a few spelling and grammatical errors, this story is well-written. I hope you continue writing stories for the "Boku to Maoh" universe.

Oh my goodness! This was WONDERFUL! At first, I didn't think I liked the direction it was going in, but somehow your writing style held me for just a little longer, and I was deffinately rewarded for reading on, by a perfect ending. This couple just can't suddenly be a standard romantic set, it has to be a rival/antagonizing love. You wrote it perfectly. Go You! ^_^

randomly came across this-i like it alot and looked forward to reading some more of your stuff:)

Umm... Big Sister? I... Oh, I don't even know what I wanted to say anymore.

You know I love this story! Glad to see you posted it finaly! WOOHOO!
Do write another sometime!
I'll try and get the rest of the longer fic inspired from Welcome up.