=( so sad

faith

Holy crap! This was an absolutely amazing piece of fiction and gorgeous writing! I love the angst in the piece, so sad, I felt so much emotion that when Harry died, I nearly broke down.

One of my favorite lines:

"No. No it isn't. Some habits are just hard to break."

"Like calling me Potter?"

"I don't think calling you by name would change anything."

Harry gave as casual a shrug he could manage. He knew it would change a lot of things, but he didn't dare suggest it.

Gives so much character to the both of them. I freaking love this fic, gonna bookmark, good job.

Gods! I was almost in tears... Great work ^_^

Very well done, very tragic but also sweet. Bittersweet doesn't quite cover it. But great job.

Whoa. That was really intense... but also really awesome!

woah! this story is deep!i really liked it!you write so well! i am jealous! ;)

Wow. That was absolutely wonderful. I am so impressed with your work. Whether it be poetry or fanfiction, you simply excel. You're the only reason why I'm here on this site, although I'd probably poke around here. I thought the descriptions at the end were whee! fantastic. Loved it sweetie.

*sniffles* this was sad! poor harry! i like ur stories!

cool. very discripive. very deep and very awesome. u have a tallent 4 writeing.
but , do take care with those sleeping pills. they are tricky.
but i really liked ur work. its creative.

i know who is harry, but who's draco? and and.. WTF i dunno what to say!
well pris i don't exactly have any corrective criticism if thats what ur looking for.. as ur piece is way past my level of comprehension. i liked the angsty style. i screw my pieces up if i attempt writing angst.
what war are u talking about? somehow i keep going back to the vietnam war.. morphine addiction and all.. i dunno what i'm talking about.
"It was Draco kissing him. It was Draco touching him. It was Draco entering him. It was them, and only them spending eternal bliss together as one." tell me they are NOT doing it on the pavement. it's just so wrong. or is tt a flashback?
i liked the way you killed harry. a worthy death and -a lot- of descriptions. it's like prolonged suffering. ^__^ the ending was sweet.. bittersweet kinda thing. such endings leave lasting impressions in ppl like me~ ^_^
o well guess it didnt help much. ^^;

so sad
and school is not cool so i'll do my part in making it less torturous

That was very nice and all, I really liked reading it cuz it was all sad and touchy, but Draco seems a little weak I think. Must be the war. BUt I loved how you put that in. Nice!

Very interesting and sad. I liked it very much. You are a good writer.

wow... um... very depressing, and powerful. i wasn't in tears, but it was close.

I loved the story. Almost tissue worthy. If you wanted you could put a twist on it and bring Harry back to life some how. I don't know, maby Draco's love could save him? Just a thought. It's good the way it is though. Write more. -TaraRose