Dammit!! You need to update!! Ayeka/Tenchi fics are very hard to come by, and well written ones like this one are rare, so you had better keep updating! I'm sincerely enjoying reading this fic and hope that you continue. PLEASE!!

-Libby

I really like this fic! It's adorable. Perhaps a bit OOC, but still really fun and enjoyable to read! Keep going!

0.0 *blinks* woah, a well written tenchi/Ayeka fic...that is a rare one, most of the ones i find suck >.<

Very good story! i like the you portray the chars and how you tell the story ^^ i really hope you update soon...its been almost a year sence you updated...

Eh . . . still not liking your protrayal of Aeka so much, but living with it. She's still a bit too self conscious. I'm also glad that they finally loosened up near the end of the chapter. The "Lord Tenchi" and "Lady Ayeka" with every breath was starting to grate on my nerves.

I know you made the rest just minor characters, but they were still a bit OOC. Ryoko for one I think would have done more than just clean her shoe when Tenchi was trying to make Ayeka feel better by complementing her flowers.

I'm still interested in this story so I hope you continue and finish it. Just play down Ayeka's insecurities a little bit would ya? After all it takes a person with a good sense of self-worth and confidence to be the crown princess of Jurai.

Hey, I was just on the look out for more Tenchi/Ayeka stories and I found yours. I'm not sure if I would portray Ayeka/Aeka to be so vain. She just doesn't seem like the person who'd be so absorbed on her appearance. Granted we're all a little critical of our looks (what girl/woman isn't?) but I'dlike to think that most of us don't obsess about it and that that's the type of person Aeka is.

Excellent writing though, it compells you to keep on reading. Anyway, I'm off to read the rest of it and I'll review again on the last chapter you've got up. I hope that you will finish this story!

I am a big tenchi and ayeka fan so I liked this story a whole lot.

I thought it was way cool!And the "date" scene was fantastic!Well, that's just my opinion.I'm a Tenchi/Ayeka fan and since many people are Tenchi/Ryoko fan *shudders* fics of the T/A couple are hard to find,so anyway keep up the good work and update A.S.A.P. or write something new.OK?Buh-bye!

Wanna-Be-Black Girl, you rule. And yes, that is your name from now on.
From,
Wanna-Be-Oriental

Thank you very much for updating so soon, RoyalTearDrop! I liked the date scene, even though I must admit it wasn't perfect - too much of the skipped dialogue. But then again, writing dates is always a very difficult thing, at least IMHO. It is also important to mention, that so far you managed to keep Ayeka and Tenchi in character quite well, and that's is not such an easy feat. It is very interesting to see how Ayeka slowly getting more and more bold and confident in your story. In short, keep up your good writing, RoyalTearDrop! Please, RoyalTearDrop, write the next chapter of this wonderful story of yours as soon as possible!
P.S.
No more criticism so far, from me at least.

Omg, I love this story! It's really nice to see a Tenchi/Ayeka story once and awhile. I like the whole story line too. It's cute and sweet. I always get a smile on my face everytime I read one of the T/A fluff scenes. I mean, seriously, they are so cute together. Anyway, ur fic is really coming along, I'm glad u decided to keep going with it. And that one flamer...don't worry about it. That person doesn't know wut they were saying. It's a great fic and I really can't wait till u update it. I hope Tenchi tells Ayeka his feelings soon and vice-versa. U have a wonderful talent for writing and I look forward to wut u have in store for us viewers in the future. *smiles* Anywho, hope u're update is soon! I'm dying to know wut happens after the big date. Hehehe.
PoutingCutie
P.s. I think u did the date scene well, so ya. Also, I didn't notice really any spelling errors...but then again I'm horrible at spelling. So hehe it's not like I would of know. My only critism is the Christianity thing, like some other reviewers stated. I don't think they would use phrases like that. Anyway, that's all I got. keep up the good work! *thinks* Was my review long enough? hehe

it was realli good! KEEP IT UP.

it's not THAT bad...but i'm not exactly the best either...though according to your reviews i'd say you'd contradict me there...that is...if you've figured out who i am since i changed my nomdeplume.

Hi, RoyalTearDrop! I am glad that you have updated this wonderful story of yours so soon! However, this time I have a bit of criticism for you, if you don't mind.
You wrote:
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"Oh! Ryoko, for Christ's sake look at what you've made me do!" Sighing frustrated, Ayeka shot Ryoko a death stare and began to wipe up the spilled polish with several white table napkins.
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I suspect, that you have completely forgotten, that Christian religion doesn't exist on Jurai. As far as I know, the Goddess named Tsunami is primary or probably even only deity for Juraians, and so, Ayeka would more likely say something like:
"Oh! Ryoko, for Goddess' sake look at what you've made me do!"
Of course, Ayeka could possibly pick up some Christian expressions on Earth, but...
Ayeka happened to land in Japan, and as far as I know, Christian religion is EXTREMLY rare in Japan; as far as I know (once again), in Japan they have their own religion, called Shinto, which has very little common with Christian religion.
I know, that this was a very tiny mistake of yours, RoyalTearDrop, but it was a mistake nevertheless. SO, RoyalTearDrop, please, consider editing this part of the third chapter of this otherwise wonderful story of yours, okay?
A little bit later, you wrote:
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Rolling her eyes, Ayeka walked over to the small trash disposal by the sink and said, "Ryoko, I don't want to pull off a color like that, for god's sake."
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Once again, I have to point out, that Ayeka would more likely say something like:
"Ryoko, I don't want to pull off a color like that, for Goddess' sake."
Some more criticism, okay?
I am pretty sure, that blond Galaxy Police Detective's name is Mihoshi, not Mihowshi. I haven't pointed it out to you in the second chapter of this story of yours, as I though that it was a simple misspelling, but now, I would like to point it out to you.
Other then these three moments your story was trully wonderful to read, RoyalTearDrop, and I certainly hope that you will write then next chapter of this wonderful story of yours as soon as possible. However, these three moments really spoiled the reading for me a little bit, RoyalTearDrop.
Anyway, keep up your good writing, RoyalTearDrop, and try to learn from your mistakes, so that you wouldn't repeat them. Okay?
P.S.
I really hope that you wouldn't mind a little criticism from me, would you, RoyalTearDrop?

I was awesome. I wish all love was real like that ::tear:: I'm all wrapped up in it though, you better keep writing and letting me know!

please, please write the date...I want to see what happens next!!