This story is so good...you have to keep on it...please,upload a new chapter

Gawh!

I should have figured this was you! Twister? Who else would be so clever!

I read this fiction a while back, off some website, but I lost the link after it seemed abandoned... why haven't you updated?!

I want more, please! (After you save Van from Aspen, of course)

wow i love ur story, please write more. i actually found myself stopping and laughing outloud at the pranks they pull and i really want van and billie to get together =] update soon!

hay i love this tory, are you gonna write more i really want billie and van to get together.

another update...alwaya a good thing!
I love how you are describing the growing attraction between Van and Billie...and the situations that you put the three in are hilarious
I have one complaint however...PLEASE PUT THE UPDATES IN FASTER! If the update isn't put in for a while, I find that I have to re-read previous sections...a bit tedious
So keep all the updates coming...FASTER! :)

nice addition to the story...im so glad that this story is being continued...keep up the hard work!

still coming along very nicely!
i like the slight romance side that uve put to it..tar and feathers..lol...that's just bad!
keep it up, waiting for next chappy :)

ireally like this. its's funny. BRAINSTORM-DO A BILLIE/PERISH. YOU LIKE?...

hehehe nice ending...is that it??
this review is mainly to say sorry about my last one...i hadn't realised that the bill wasn't your story, and i apologise if you feel that i have offended you or anyone else.
however, this story still brings a smile to my face and the occasional laugh...thanks for a great read :)

lol...funny story...i like the idea of van and billie having this war...but i don't think that they would swear as much as you've put them down to...remember, when writing fanfiction, keep to the charactersation that we are provided with.
other than that...a great story, i loved your other, the bill...that was good, and i hope that u can get ur next chapter out on this one!
dont be discouraged by the lack of reviews, fastlane isnt well known yet, so give it time!
again, well done..and keep up the good work!
UPDATE :)

i really like it! please keep on writing, i want to read more =)