 Water-Soter 2009-10-10 . chapter 4Oh, wow, you left it *there*! It's good, really good. Normally I'd just add to chapter alert the story and leave it at that, but my stories have been getting that threatment and I don't want to do it to other authors. Great piece. You really captured the characters' essences and voices. I really hope you finish this. |
 Gothic Anime Lover 2009-09-17 . chapter 4WHOO! DRUNK!Sasuke! Fun-ness. :3
I LOVE THIS!! PLEASE UPDATE!! |
 Gothic Anime Lover 2009-09-17 . chapter 3WHOOT!! Naru-chan's home!! X3 Poor Sasuke had to go get drunk... Sakura's with Lee eh? Nice. |
 Gothic Anime Lover 2009-09-17 . chapter 2WHO~~! Naru-chan is hot!! HAHAHAHA!! Take that Sasuke! I LOVE THIS! YOu had me going there with the "infection" for a while i thought he was dying.. but that's just my overactive imagination there...
Anyway! AWESOME CHAPTER!! Lovely bitter taste with a hint of sarrow! |
 Gothic Anime Lover 2009-09-17 . chapter 1Augh!! Naru-chan!! DAMN YOU SASUKE!!
This is indeed different, but could you be pursuaded to write this as a SasuNaru? Eh? Either way, it's still awesome! |
 Jumby 2009-05-04 . chapter 4OH HELL
I have to tell you, I haven't listened to so much Placebo in a long time. It works beautifully as a soundtrack ;D
And neither have I come across such brilliant writing in a long time. The way you're approaching this is absolutely fantastic; I'm in slight awe here.
Damn.
So wow, just wow. Amazing story, amazing plot, amazing writing. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter >3< |
 paramourconspiracy 2008-08-05 . chapter 4Ahh love! It's all love. Usually rushing into kissing is completely annoying a just a huge story-NONO, but your timing really makes it fall into place, like it makes sense that that should happen . . . And honestly, a drunken Sasuke is just /delicious/, not that he isn't always. Get your ** to updating and don't let this die!
-Paramour |
 twilight2411 2008-06-22 . chapter 4please update! |
 Shalmoli 2008-04-06 . chapter 1See, I really don't know *why you discontinued this story when it potrayed NaruSasu romance in a way no other story has. I like the changes you made to their characters, it is only normal that they would change over the course of time.
This story needs to be updated. |
 Blood Zephyr 2008-03-28 . chapter 4O.O ...MORE PLEASE! |
 Skittlesaremydrugofchoice 2008-03-24 . chapter 4This is great. I love how you write Naruto all twisted and ** up. Please tell me that this fic isn't abandonded? |
 LynLin 2007-12-21 . chapter 4Dang. Another fics I like. I hope this gets updated some time. Other than that, great job. As for your problem with Lee...I figure just write a character that's really hyper and happy, and you're good to go. He and Naruto aren't close, but they have tons of respect for each other. If that helps...yea. hahaha anyway, yay. Good job with the slashyness and the angstyness. Those aren't even words, but yay!
-Lyn |
 shogi 2007-11-29 . chapter 4Ooh, I love this! Not too cliche at all and I thought Lee was ok. I don't really know much of how he acts, other than weird that is, in his green spandex, so I guess whatever you do with him is great! I noticed that this hasn't been updated since... 2004... does that mean this is discontinued? (please say no, please say no, PLEASE say no!) You're writing is quite superb and I really am enjoying it a lot!
Ah, I've also checked your art on that link on your profile and it's AMAZING! Holy crap it's good! I especially love this wings, both demon and angel. I've always loved trying to draw wings and such and yours are the BEST I've ever seen! Really, they're quite extraordinary! |
 a dreamer's attic 2007-10-28 . chapter 4TT_TT It's unfortunate you seem to have decided to abandon this fic. It really has a great start and the potential to be a very interesting fiction.
I hope that you one day decide to pick this fic up again, despite how unlikely that would be. |
 darkenedmirrors.softfocus 2007-07-21 . chapter 4I'd marry you if it were legal.
I love this fic! |