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Water-Soter
2009-10-10 . chapter 4
Oh, wow, you left it *there*! It's good, really good. Normally I'd just add to chapter alert the story and leave it at that, but my stories have been getting that threatment and I don't want to do it to other authors. Great piece. You really captured the characters' essences and voices. I really hope you finish this.
Gothic Anime Lover
2009-09-17 . chapter 4
WHOO! DRUNK!Sasuke! Fun-ness. :3

I LOVE THIS!! PLEASE UPDATE!!
Gothic Anime Lover
2009-09-17 . chapter 3
WHOOT!! Naru-chan's home!! X3 Poor Sasuke had to go get drunk... Sakura's with Lee eh? Nice.
Gothic Anime Lover
2009-09-17 . chapter 2
WHO~~! Naru-chan is hot!! HAHAHAHA!! Take that Sasuke! I LOVE THIS! YOu had me going there with the "infection" for a while i thought he was dying.. but that's just my overactive imagination there...

Anyway! AWESOME CHAPTER!! Lovely bitter taste with a hint of sarrow!
Gothic Anime Lover
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
Augh!! Naru-chan!! DAMN YOU SASUKE!!

This is indeed different, but could you be pursuaded to write this as a SasuNaru? Eh? Either way, it's still awesome!
Jumby
2009-05-04 . chapter 4
OH HELL

I have to tell you, I haven't listened to so much Placebo in a long time. It works beautifully as a soundtrack ;D

And neither have I come across such brilliant writing in a long time. The way you're approaching this is absolutely fantastic; I'm in slight awe here.

Damn.

So wow, just wow. Amazing story, amazing plot, amazing writing. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter >3<
paramourconspiracy
2008-08-05 . chapter 4
Ahh love! It's all love. Usually rushing into kissing is completely annoying a just a huge story-NONO, but your timing really makes it fall into place, like it makes sense that that should happen . . . And honestly, a drunken Sasuke is just /delicious/, not that he isn't always. Get your ** to updating and don't let this die!

-Paramour
twilight2411
2008-06-22 . chapter 4
please update!
Shalmoli
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
See, I really don't know *why you discontinued this story when it potrayed NaruSasu romance in a way no other story has. I like the changes you made to their characters, it is only normal that they would change over the course of time.

This story needs to be updated.
Blood Zephyr
2008-03-28 . chapter 4
O.O ...MORE PLEASE!
Skittlesaremydrugofchoice
2008-03-24 . chapter 4
This is great. I love how you write Naruto all twisted and ** up. Please tell me that this fic isn't abandonded?
LynLin
2007-12-21 . chapter 4
Dang. Another fics I like. I hope this gets updated some time. Other than that, great job. As for your problem with Lee...I figure just write a character that's really hyper and happy, and you're good to go. He and Naruto aren't close, but they have tons of respect for each other. If that helps...yea. hahaha anyway, yay. Good job with the slashyness and the angstyness. Those aren't even words, but yay!

-Lyn
shogi
2007-11-29 . chapter 4
Ooh, I love this! Not too cliche at all and I thought Lee was ok. I don't really know much of how he acts, other than weird that is, in his green spandex, so I guess whatever you do with him is great! I noticed that this hasn't been updated since... 2004... does that mean this is discontinued? (please say no, please say no, PLEASE say no!) You're writing is quite superb and I really am enjoying it a lot!
Ah, I've also checked your art on that link on your profile and it's AMAZING! Holy crap it's good! I especially love this wings, both demon and angel. I've always loved trying to draw wings and such and yours are the BEST I've ever seen! Really, they're quite extraordinary!
a dreamer's attic
2007-10-28 . chapter 4
TT_TT It's unfortunate you seem to have decided to abandon this fic. It really has a great start and the potential to be a very interesting fiction.

I hope that you one day decide to pick this fic up again, despite how unlikely that would be.
darkenedmirrors.softfocus
2007-07-21 . chapter 4
I'd marry you if it were legal.
I love this fic!
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