 Merccy 2004-01-25 . chapter 1I'm such a sap when it comes to fanfiction, but I LOVE this. I really do. Especially the baptism theme. :) Keep up the excellent work! [On my Favorite Stories list] |
 Mariel3 2004-01-15 . chapter 1This worked very well on several levels. You maintained the theme beautifully. The mood of the story was nicely handled, and I just plain enjoyed it! |
 Aquarius4 2004-01-14 . chapter 1he! What a great idea for a story. I always look foward to reading your new pieces, and this was just as amazing as all of you other stories. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more of you writing. |
 EOlivet 2004-01-14 . chapter 1Wow, dude -- WOW! I loved how you wove the theme throughout -- the flashbacks, the images in Jack's mind, all culminating with the surreal nature of his "baptism." Such emotional and lovely dialogue between J&S -- both characterized so beautifully. If you wanted to raise the bar, congratulations!! You rock -- keep writing!! :) |
 Caia 2004-01-13 . chapter 1I'm not surprised to like this fic too. It has a lot of feelings, A LOT. You have to find them but it's really not that hard. You describe it perfectly, his feelings for her... |
 Midnight Caller 2004-01-13 . chapter 1Wow, this was awesome!! I loved how you wove in the word here and there until it literally became its own entity in the story. Great mix of action and emotion. :) |
 SunReyes 2004-01-13 . chapter 1i like how you show how much Jack is still in love with Samantha. We get to see the hero he is, even with all the trouble, pain, and wrong doings in his life. I loved it, as usual :) |