wow thats really good! one of my favourites i think! pls pls pls update asap!!

cool

It's Newton not Newing.

Oh, great! I really love how you get deep into the characters' emotions. It makes it all very real. And you keep your writing in the style, too! Please post again soon!
--Sir Miles

This is a very good story I hope you update soon.

Hehe, I loved the damsels in distress club! More please. Clark needs to be forgiven. Good chapter. RG.

good so far, please update soon!

I love the irony at the end with the blue spandex. Keep it up. I wanna know if he finds her.

Oh I've always wanted to have the end of season 1 handled differently with Clark and Chloe :) I'm glad youre writing this! I can't wait to read more! We need for Chlark ^_^

oh yeah. I loved the way she blew up at him. It was great. The discription about them shifting through his mind like it was a comb brought the whole thing into focus and I loved that imagery.

I like this. Well, lets face it, a Clark-Chloe happy ending should have closed season 1, despite all the more shippy material thats come our way since. I think your Chloe (although we haven;t heard a lot from her yet) is reading very well. Her snappiness is very realistic. I especially like the way you've chosen to write a rounded story and to continue the Lex-Lionel storyline to balance out the Clark-Chloe goodies! I'd like to see some more of our favourite couple interacting in further chapters. Big thumbs up so far.

That was a really good beginning. I liked pretty much everything, including the Lex/Lionel conversation. My only problem was that it was too short - I didn't want it to end where it did. Please write quickly and tell us what happens next. I'm really enjoying your story. RG.

Oh man you have to write more! I love this story. You have me hooked with that promise of things being different.

Very well written, please update soon! :-)

nice... continue on soon! =)