Really liking this. So the stepwitch wished and the Pops is paying for it too? Nice he took some learning.

Please update! Or atleast tell us if you intend to continue in Labby fic-ing. Its been... 8 YEARS! OMG! I just realised its been 8 years! WOW!

I've really enjoyed this so far. I wish that you would write some more.

I am loving the story thus far and i hope that you update the story soon.

Please continue writing this story. I love the way that it is going and your story has inspired me to create some artwork of the labyrinth.

Oooh, this needs more chapters. But I fear they won't come..?

This is a great story - I loved reading it!

oh, i really love this. your writing style is addictive and this as a brilliant spin on the sarah-gets-wished-away plot. could you be persuaded to continue it?

This was a great beginning. I was very disappointed to see it stop here. If you ever decided to continue it, I would be more than willing to read it.

HA I KNEW IT! THEY BOTH GO TO THE CASTLE!

sorry... anyway. More?

I agree with her choice.

Between a class I hate and dance with a goblin king, I'd take dancing with goblinking hand down!

Your story is wonderful so far! I love how Jareth and Sarah interact and how he can't constantly help her now. I hope you have it finished somewhere - I'm going to go and explore your other works now because you're such a damn good writer.

This is the most original story I have found in the Labyrinth section. I hope you can eventually continue it.

This story so far is wonderful. I love this story I hope you add some more. Also Jareth is much kindered but is still quite like the one i love. Well keep it up the story is marvelous so far.

Well damnations, almost 5 years since this lovely story was updated.

I love it so far.