This story so far is wonderful. I love this story I hope you add some more. Also Jareth is much kindered but is still quite like the one i love. Well keep it up the story is marvelous so far.

Well damnations, almost 5 years since this lovely story was updated.
I love it so far.

The only thing that saddens me is that, after four years, you're probably not going to finish this story. Such a pity, I really did love it.

"Do either of these doors lead to the Castle?"

"They both do...eventually."

XD! That was a great answer!

One of the jobs I would try out for if I ever lived there is the guard dogs' door post job. You meet new people and eveyday is different.

Your other half of your soul ?

I'm sad to see that you have abandoned this story. I was really enjoying how it was going.
I'm interested to see why Jareth couldn't help Sarah more, and what was going to happen with Sarah's dad.
I would love to see more.

this is hilarious! i do hope you continue this fic in this vein, it is such a joy to read, dang, now im sounding all weird like. anyway, i hope you update soon! i wonder what will happen to the anthony guy?

I think it's a bit of a cop out making Karen the generic 'evil' stepmother, especially when she didn't really come off that way in the film, but it is an interesting idea of Sarah being the one wished away. I think it could have worked better using Sarah's real mother, since there seems to be a hint of abandonment issues there but that's my personal opinion.

Well written though, I like Jareth stalking her in her world. I can see it being the sort of dogged, 'I refuse to give up yet' sort of thing he would do.

oh ho how tricky well keep up the good work ^_^

ah! and I have come to the end of the story... for now. I must say it is beautifully written. I can't wait to see more!

I love how Sarah is slowly making a life for herself in the Labyrinth, and how she gets to meet all sorts of new and interesting people.

Nice touch with Sarah being a water elemental... very cool!

In the summary of this story you wrote that Sarah won't become queen... does that mean she continues to act as a guide for the challengers?

Anyways, great story!! I hope you have a chance to update soon. Know that I (and presumably your other readers) are waiting with bated breath.

oh ho!! and Jareth is to be the other half of Sarah's soul... perhaps?

only point to make is that hans christan anderson is the one who brought us the original little mermaid
please please please update this awesome story soon!

OH, this is GREAT!
keep it up- I like the idea that Karen may have been a rotten mother, and not the misunderstood person most authors make her as.
Keep writing!

I love this story, as it takes a different view than others ^^. I was just wondering if you were ever planning on updating?

I like this story , it's really quite entertaining with the challenger, and everything moves at a smooth steady pace, please finish, I would like to know how it ends.


Lizzy