i fell 4 bruce

Outstanding story. Very well written. The end was interesting, as was the entire story.

Poor Bruce. . .

I think it was very well wriiten. It really is a good story.

Interesting, and really well-written.
The first time I read it I spent all my time trying to work out who was saying what (I mistakenly thought Jor-El was the father being referred to - which presumably was what you intended - and also, for one horrible moment, I thought Superman and Batman were going to get married).
Once I'd got to the end everything fell into place (including the J'onn's machine reference which I didn't get at first), although I wasn't sure whether the ENDWORD was Diana's words, her thoughts, or an author's note.

LOL! "Yeah, well, whatever"?
To the little loves who get away...damn them. :)
Great writing, as always.

I'm not sure I fully understand (I rarely do) but awesome story mate. :P It's very deep. Probly why I don't understand. Anyway, great job. Adios.
~Caliente~
a.k.a. LeXi