keep goin! i like it!

i loved this story.i can't help but wonder what happened to Marge.i hope that Marge didn't get the Dursley estate it should go to Harry a repayment for everything they did to him.i like the new Snape.i loved how happy Remus was when Harry gave him the cure for lycanthropy.i can't wait for more.keep up the great work

Remus reminded me of a excited puppy just now. I think the story. You may want to check spelling errors.

The scene right at the end of chapter 19 is one of my favorites.

I hope that Harry will be able to repair his eye eventually. Oh! I also liked Harry's comment about annoying people by having twinkling eyes.

I would love to read more about interactions between Harry and Remus and Harry and Severus individually.

How is Harry doing with Sirius. He hasn't been brought up. Is Harry moving on and dealing with it. Or, is he ignoring the issue? Just wondering.

Well, thanks for sharing and I hope that you continue.

I love this story!
Its awesome!
Something I hate though...everytime I come across a really good story...the story turns out to be discontinued.

pleeaase start writing more of this story!

Since I read your explanation, I won't whine about an update. I won't, I won't, I tell you - well OK maybe a little bit... I simply love your story, and do look forward to read more of it. Don't get me wrong, I have no desire to cut your stay abroad short or make you feel bad or something; it's just that I really look forward to read more! Oh well, I'll put you on my alert list, and will have to learn to be patient, yes?

I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying your story. Looking forward to your next update. Thanks.

Hope you get a chance to update soon. Wishing you inspiration.

Can't wait till you have time to update. This is a very good story, and I love it.

please, please PLEASE update this fic. I really like it and can't wait for more. have you abandoned the fic? cause if you hae I don't wanna keep hoping for more.

wow, so when Harry fixes his eye, is it going to stay white? that would be cool

Okay another Great Story I am hoping that this isnt abandoned or a dead in the water fic it is realy realy good.

Thank you






Hemotem

Pretty good.
It takes a little too long to start going anywhere, and you find yourself thinking 'can I really be bothered to read this?', while the diary chapters are good with the angst and are good to read, especially with Snape's reaction, it is not until chapter10 that you begin to read something more exciting and interesting. I'm afraid you'll find the first 9 chapters 'set the scene' a bit too much, could have been cut down immensely and felt like I was trying to read through a brick wall!

Lupin's curing scenes were hilarious and most of the laughter you portrayed here was amusing in and of itself. Harry's regaining memories night was cool and Severus' changing attitude and all th positions it put him in because of that were sweet and amusing and kind of cute. Cslling Harry 'little one' one of them. The bit with Harry suprising DD, the welcome feast, the 'twinkling' appearance and peoples reactions were good too. Plus Harry's slightly boyish tendency that remained is pretty cute even though he's now remembered everything.

And the embarassment that Harry should have felt about it all, I definietly felt. On the whole it was good. The events in the hospital, especially Hedwig and Oh! Hedwig's pov is way cool, and Harry's behaviour with the doctor etc were alright, its just it was too long winded lol :p

You need to work a bit on your grammer, but its not terribly bad and later chapters and speeches do get better.
Any chance you would update, though i'm not sure where you might this one, it could go several tangents at the moment.

That was so amazingly awesome! It was so good I was sad to see it end. I am anxiously excited to read more, and I hope you will update soon, as i am very much looking forward to chapter twenty!

I read your profile first and then was annoyed at myself that the story I had to choose appeared deserted. I really like this story...Especially with the twist with the car accident and diary. Why won't you continue? At least make Harry heal his eye and stomp on Oldie-moldie. That would be HILARIOUS! Voldie comes in while Harry is still physically cripled and Harry defeats him without breaking a sweat.