  Brightbear 2003-01-29 . chapter 1 That was really good. |
| Kathy 2001-02-02 . chapter 1 A sad, but rather faithful rendering of "life" as it is for our fav rocket jocket . . . and you're right . . . it SUCKS!!
Write On!
K, |
 raine14 2001-01-11 . chapter 1WoW! You got into John's head perfectly! Fantastic job!...raine |
| Psycho-Cucumber-Queen 2001-01-10 . chapter 1 that was fantastic. totally sounded like him. if i were you though, i would have had him talking to his dad |
| M14Mouse 2001-01-09 . chapter 1 Very good. I enjoy it very much. Keep it up! |
| seva 2001-01-08 . chapter 1 Bleak, yes, but very well written. John does have a few things to complain about. Poignant. Thanks! |
| pinkie 2001-01-08 . chapter 1 very, very good! i hope you plan on more like this! |
| ~Codes~ 2001-01-08 . chapter 1 Man I feel sorry for poor little Johnny Boy. :( Very Well Writen, I would to see more. :) |
| Kavanne 2001-01-08 . chapter 1 Wow, Liz. Strong stuff. I liked this, I could actually picture him sitting there just staring and
thinking about all that stuff. Great ending, the whole thing really got me thinking too.
See ya!
Kavanne. |
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