wonder wadsup next ... aniwayzz swell story !! update it soon k ??

wow cool chapter it was really good i liked it lots update when you can

Good fic - I like how it's coming out.

Hi, I'm Back. Sorry for not reviewing in so long, but I was very busy. I really like your story, but I think your spelling could be a little better. If their typos that's okay.

I really like your story so far, please write the next chapter. I think Flamon is so Kawaii!
I wish my mum would let me bring a giant wolf digimon into the front room (^-^)

I like this a lot, so please update soon. ^_^

plz update this soon it sounds really good i like the idea a lot

u all are gay ** **
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Great chap. ceep sendin them
^__-

Hmm. I wonder how Takuya's parents are going to handle this.
KellyQ

by the way, I love Strabimon and Flamon. XD I was looking at some of your other reviews and I'm glad others were helping out. Can I add a couple suggestions? ^^:
-When ending a quotation, such as -- " My name's Takuya," said the boy -- be sure to use a comma and then finish the sentence with a lower-case verb (unless, of course, you have a sentence such as -- " My name's Takuya," Takuya said. -- where the pronoun has to be capitalized).
-One thing my English teachers pounded into me early in my life- and also last year- was the use the commas. My teacher last year told me it is almost impossible to overuse commas unless they are used improperly. Commas tell the reader to pause when he/she reads. This is important because it gives the reader time to think about what you have written. Periods do this as well, but when you join two ideas (like this sentence, hehe) in one sentence, use a comma to separate them.
I also have the strangest desire to ask... is English your native language? ^^ I like knowing as much as possible about an author when reading his/her stories. That's just my preference, though. ^^
Lol, I'm not much of an English teacher, but these are just a couple things that I think would make your writing much better. =D I love your fic ideas ^^
If you would like more tips, I'll try to find some time to type some for you. Or you can tell me to shut up if you don't like what I'm doing, lol. XD

Hehe, I'm seeing some improvement in your writing. Keep on going! =D

I really like that chapter.
KellyQ

I like this so far, and I want this to be a Takuya x Kouji couple fanfic.

I really like that chapter! It was cool! I cannot wait for more.
KellyQ