Very well writen story. The inner dialogs not only give you insigt on the thoughts of the characters but subtle, and sometimes overt, senses of felling beyond the words. The story line promises to be very engrossing. Please continue this story as I would like to see how it turns out.

Oh my god, Great story. you have to hurry up. I been a very big fan of your work for many years now and i throught that you stop writing but it seen not. I can't wait for the enxt Chapter. MeidaMiner.org is pretty good but it's not like Fanfiction.net oh well. Good luck and i hope you give us a another Great Chapter.
-Lord Shinji

Been a long time since I read an updated version of the saga... oh wait. The Evangelion arc was updated in MediaMiner I think.
Anyway, the order ain't the thing. It's all in the outcome.
^_^

It's still good even if its incomplete, i read you're other two fics at mediaminer and theyre great. I agree with your idea of just putting all of of the 1/2 saga when you have finished all of them. Update as soon as you can.