Aww! So cute! I loved the story a whole lot. Meryl's thoughts were very IC. Excellent work! The latter half of the story is not indented, and the first half is, which is kind of unusual...

Anyway, I love how deeply you went into Meryl's motivations. Squee! Vash/Meryl is the best! I saw a single spelling mistake (translucent misspelled as transluscent) but otherwise this was flawless.

-Alaena

Ah yes, the Red Thread legend. I didn't really think of that till you brought it up.

Very nice Meryl introspection. Not too many of those that don't have her sound like a love struck idiot.

as soon as i read that kiss line i thought of peter pan... sweet, i love hook. great fic. i totally love it. red coats are hott. well, ja ne.

Ah... yet another good one. I like it a lot now I must rush because my head will be ripped off if I am discovered on the computer at this time of night...err... day if you will.

(PS- You're on my favorites list now.)

~Baka-Chan10

OOh, sehr gut! I like muchly! I do like the symbolism with the red thread/fate. Very good. Good descriptions. It had kind of that dry, dead-to-the-world feeling I get whenever I'm depressed ^_^ Good job, I like it!

Where are you queen!;_;
Heheh, this is just...wow... I'm just wondering where this fic will go.
Update soon!

Plz keep writing. This is a nice fleshy peice of writing full o' substance. I have saved this to my favourites. 'nuff said. Gah! Meryl's my favourite female Trigun character and I DON'T KNOW WHY! Um...I'll get back to you when I go find myself _-_

pain and anguish. ^_^
This was a very intersting story to read while I was supposed to be watching teenagers.
I must say at one point I heard more Queen than Meryl in one of those dorks...either that or Meryl talks like you more than I realized. ^_^;;
This was good. V. Cute. I expected no less.

Very nice reflection fic, Queen. I think you captured
how Meryl would feel as she mends Vash's coat. The
feeling running through her head, the decisions not
made. Very enjoyable.
On another note, sorry I haven't been reading Good Karma,
I've got some catching up to do, but I will get to it.

This is the first Trigun Fanfic I've read, and it's very good. I like how her thoughts about Vash are interrupted when she pricks her fingers. It's very real. Great fic, and keep up the good work.

Red is also supposed to symbolize youth and freshness in Japan... but I guess you already knew that. ^^; Good fic, as always. I really enjoy your writing style and the way you put your words together; keep it up. I'm eagerly awaiting the end to Good Karma, though. ;)
Laterz

OMG...this is a gem. This is going on my favourites list! Very interesting use of symbolism. If I had your skills, I'd have an A+ in my Lit class =D I don't think it's overly romantic, not at all. It's just nice and reflective and is perfect for a cozy read. I can tell a good author from the way they pay attention to the details in the eps. Very perceptive. So far, I think you've kept Meryl in character. You have no idea how much some people appreciate it when their favourite characters are kept in perspective. Looking forward to more chapters n_n

It's so odd how you used the same theme for two different fanfictions, yet got a totally different feel for both. I'm both impressed and envious.
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I love the little touches of symbolism throughout... the red string of fate, Meryl mending Vash's coat when what she really wants to do is mend his soul. It all manages to be deep and sweet at the same time. And the thing about the stains being both ketchup and blood... that just seems like such a great way of characterizing Vash without doing so blatantly. It's so him.
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Overall you did a great job.

Simply beautiful. You've taken a simple scene in the anime and added so much of your own meaning to it. I think it had a lot of meaning in the anime.. when Meryl was sewing the coat, looking up at the Fifth Moon... but you added so much more. I love the symbolism in this, and it is very well-written. Beautiful emotion.

This was a nice fic and a great look at what Meryl was thinking. You did a really good job of writing this and hopefully you'll write more stories like this