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| Reviews for A Visitor and a Piece of Paper |
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   loopycathair 10/30/08 . chapter 2i really like where your going with this story please update soon! |
| Mantinas 8/27/06 . chapter 2 Great story! |
| Livana Mingan 8/26/06 . chapter 2 PLEASEMAKE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE. |
| benisabigot 9/29/05 . chapter 1 srry but i have to mention this jim going from complete trust to dont you touch him rat boy is confuzzling |
| Spaugs 8/17/05 . chapter 2 Cool! Very interesting. You need to work on your paragraph spacing though. Please finish this chapter! |
| sharaku 5/18/05 . chapter 2 I am interested! |
| KatCarre 4/20/05 . chapter 2 I love this story, so glad you decided to continue it! (Just as long as it doesn't take you another year to update again!) Love Sandy's character, and the way you reflect Willard's jumbled up thoughts. Keep on writing, I love this story! :) Kat |
| almighty lord of flop 2/15/04 . chapter 1 very good story so far plz give more chappies and she is going to his house to meet ben isnt she |
| Xeno Night 2/4/04 . chapter 1 It was written alright. When does his new little rat friend come in? Very good story. Please, write more. |
| Heavenmetal 1/16/04 . chapter 1 interesting story. Is there going to be more to this? If so, I really hope this isn't going to be a romance cause that'd be weird (in a bad way) but I'd still read it. :D Anyway, I'm a huge fan of the Willard remake and I think you really have his character down. |
