Hm...interesting. Sad, but lovely. Very nice writing, though I think I'm going to have to go read something insanely happy to make up for it. Nice, though. :)

That was wonderful. You're such a brilliant writer.
*sighs* It broke my heart, just broke it :(

I love this. Your imagery was absolutely amazing, and I just loved the way it flowed. I have nothing but good things to say about this. Nice job! :)

I think you did an excellent job getting inside of Sirius's head. Really, that was great. Your imagery was amazing. I can see him out there swirling in his circle of doom, his soul being slowly pulled from him. It makes me feel really sorry for him, but if he really was like this inside, then perhaps it's better he died, or whatever happened to him. I loved all the dark touches you threw in there. Perhaps some regrets Sirius has about how he ended up like this. Nice work, I love it.
;)