Mm, *pants*... Congratulations, this fic has officially turned me into a drooling vegetable. :)

Great fic I just love Tat/Wat pairings alot though Tat/Tsu is pretty high on my list. However I blame you for keeping me away from my Jury essay which will make me fail my Civil Law class but its a pretty good way to fail. Either way um... I'm rambling and I'm gonna go do my essay now or read more fics, whichever comes first.

Tatsumi,leather pants=good.
Watari, leather pants=good.
Them together. In a club. Hot!
Lovely fic. ^_^

another nice read. you deserve to be in my favorites! i'll be reading the sequel after this then. till the next review!

It's...*sniff* Not Fair! wah! I , like, read all your fics and said, why, I have to review, this girl writes beautifully. But you know how it is...I leave it for the next day and before I know it, you reviewed one of my stories and now it'll look like that's why I'm reviewing and it's not!!1 T.T Anyway...leather pants *drool* Tatari forever!

Whe, that was great. :D I read Casual Friday too, not sure why I didn't review, though... heh. But YAY for Watari/Tatsumi-ness, and [faints] yay for Tatsumi in leather pants. ^_~ The arguments/conversations are the best, and I do love the way Tatsumi decided to get rid of Konoe... though how he found them there in the first place is way beyond me :D Heh.

'Twas very adorable. ::Flying tackle glomp::
Sweet-tapdancing-Christ, I love your writing. ^^

lol, so glad there was a sequel!

I liked the first one and I like this one even better! If you get casual Tatsumi, can I have bondage Tatsumi? *sparkly eyes* I bet he looks GOOD in leather. One thing, in the first paragraph I think Tsusuki would abscond with the muffins instead of just abscond them. I envy you I can't write anything remotely smutty. I've tried it just ends up mushy, so congrats!

Hi!
Loved it!
This was truly brilliant! I adored the whole concept, but I do agree that Tatsumi was a little out of character towards the end...but that's o.k. After all he was trying to be different for Watari.
One small personal comment, I reckon it might have been a bit more exciting if there had been greater conflict between Watari and Tatsumi over this 'habit of a life-time' that Tatsumi has, after all it's kind of like a split personality Tatsumi has and that's 'safe' for him, he's comfortable when he presents this cold and efficient side of himself and I reckon coming out of the 'safe zone' may involve some kicking and screaming...or as close as our scary shadow-master gets to kicking and screaming, this in turn would have made for some excellent angst and make or break decisions.
Now please don't take that as me bashing your fic because hand over heart, I loved it very much and have already been through it several times. My God! The image of Tatsumi deep-throating Watari to ** off Konoe is burned into my brain it's so strong, this is just a suggestion.
Oh, and the dialogue was perfect. The whole scene where they're discussing Watari breaking some bloke's jaw or feeling up Tatsumi and Watari being shanghaied by a bunch of lesbian's were very, very funny (so now we know who's got the real temper!). It's always the ones you least expect to be violent who are, very cool!
Great stuff!
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Three bishies for Jemisard for requesting a sequel! It's a damn fine fic I must say. Although Tatsumi really was OOC in some aspects it didn't matter here because the whole concept was written in a funky-fresh (yay for no-real-sense-words lol) way. I abseloutly loved the humour and witty conversations. All in all a great read! Keep writing!

Ok, so Tatsumi was quite out of character.. but he wasn't so much. I think, he does have a strong need to please those that he loves, but not exactly in such a.. obvious way. He strikes me something more of a details man, the kind of guy who would remember your favorite food, color, how you like your cofee, etc. And do little things according to that.. but that's just me...
My fav part has to be your note, 'cause yes, Tatsumi can be very complex and very ambiguos at the same time... lol, cool.
Now, really, my fav part has to be the wording of Tsuzuki's bet. It takes a real man to dare Tatsumi to do something doubting of his balls to do so, lol. I didn't like much the last part of the story. Tatsumi would have plundered whoever touched him, and wouldn't have been so flamboyant in from of Kacho. Although, the whole point of the story was to get Tatsumi to loosen up, so maybe that's ok...
Anyways, as on critic, I like your writting style, and I think your stories are cool ^-^ so maybe there's only the bitchy part of the characterization that sometimes eludes you. But doesn't it do that to us all... so keep it up!! thanks for the story!!

Heh. Nice humor in this fic! And Tatsumi in leather pants is a good thing. A very good thing. *grin*

LOL. Wonderful job! Though I wish Tsuzuki had won the bet so we could see Tatsumi on a leash. :)

Hee hee hee...
In spite of me not being a Tatsumi/Watari fan, I like this fic. BTW, I have to know: are 007 and 216 really those birds' names? Or did you make them up? Because that would be awesome if they were...
Several things I liked. One, you said Tatsumi had the personality of a rock. That was hilarious! Two, finally, someone's made a reference to the fact that Watari does sort of look like a woman. Three, I loved the 003 braiding Watari's hair moment. Four, poor Hisoka has to put up with Wakaba...but at least she's not as bad as the other girls. Five, I really liked the general humor of this fic.
Although...I really wanted Tatsumi to lose the bet and have to let Watari lead him around on a leash all day...