 NightlySparks 2004-02-09 . chapter 8What? Why?? Why are you doing this!?? You are a great writer. You always have me looking foward to you stories and then this! Well, I hope everything works out for you. But I'm not excepting this... |
 Laraeliae Black 2004-02-03 . chapter 8I really like your story, and I"m sorry you won't be able to update. Sorry about the moving thing too!
~Laraeliae |
 Sweet-Saphine 2004-01-31 . chapter 7The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in retur." -Tolouse (Moulin Rouge)
My gosh, I love POTC and Moulin Rouge they are probably my favorite movies because 1.they have great actors/actresses and 2.the story is so catching!
Muwahaha, I see you read my fanfic, thats good to know ^_^ AND~
I read your fic and I must say the writing style is new to me. It's really interesting, and I can't wait for more!
A word of advice from author to author: make the chapters more descriptive, if you will, and describe things to clarify- that way people can relate to your imagination and sparks will fly!LoL.
Anyway, loved it, and I hope you update soon, and hopefully you'll read my updated chapter of "Opposites Attract" too!
-LostReyn |
 NightlySparks 2004-01-28 . chapter 7Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens. |
 Lady Destiny 2004-01-24 . chapter 4It wouldn't let me review on Chapter 6... but that was awesome! Whats-his-face and oak-eye escaped from prison? Update soon! |
 NightlySparks 2004-01-24 . chapter 6 I'm way to lazy to sign in! But way to go! Continue this; it's good. |
 NightlySparks 2004-01-23 . chapter 5Hey, great chapter! I loved it. I also like that you did it a bigger chapter. Kudos for that ^_~ |
 NightlySparks 2004-01-22 . chapter 4Oh, my!! Was that Anamaria? N E ways thats not important now! lol I love this! keep going!! |
 Laraeliae Black 2004-01-21 . chapter 4I really like this story; it's different from anyother I've ever read. I really liked Moulin Rouge, b/c Ewan McGregor has such a hot voice! O sorry. Anyway, this story is really getting good now. Can't wait for you to update! *i updated tavern girl! |
 sean-ghengis 2004-01-18 . chapter 3 I rate your story a b- and would have rated it a little lower until I came to the realization that your approach to the way the story is written is different and not necesarilly in a negative way. |
 Forgotten Sorceress 2004-01-18 . chapter 3Ack! *holds head* Oh no! You naughty, naughty person! Leaving me handing like that!! *cries* Well, obviously, I liked this chapter. :) I can't wait to find out what happens next! *hangs on the edge of her seat in suspense* |
 Forgotten Sorceress 2004-01-18 . chapter 2Hey there. Terribly sorry that I didn't review this chapter before. I was in Salt Lake for State Honor Choir. I got to sing the Tabernacle. Well, anyway, I didn't have an opportunity to get on the internet. DAMMIT! *pouts* Well, anyway, great chapter. Jack was a little out of character, but I suppose that's due to the ravashing beauty of Justine. *grins* Anyway, I'm going to move on to the next chapter because I can't wait to read it!
Oh, and I hate to sound like a big dirty ** (maybe I am, lol) but I think I would have liked more detail about what went on between Jack and Justine. Not to the point of being atrashy sex-novel, mind you, (although I'm not AGAINST reading them... )but a little descriptiveness would be lovely. :) |
 NightlySparks 2004-01-18 . chapter 2I don't like Valley Girl and Sixteen Candles it makes me throw up. NO one can have a perfect life! Lol just joking I don't anything about sixteen candles and I think I read valley girl when I was in 6th grade don't think I remember. Anyways good chapter! And maybe it's your style of writing but maybe you can skip a line after someone talks. It draws some people away! Anyways, write more and I'll be back! |
 NightlySparks 2004-01-18 . chapter 1Very interesting... lol I really don't know the movie and I'm not about to guess! Write more! Oh, wait there's another chapter! |
 LadyArcana 2004-01-15 . chapter 1Hey, thanks for reviewing my story! I like yours. :D It's most definitely an ode to Moulin Rouge as well..;) |