OK, If you want a reviewer/ prereader, I would be happy to do so. I have kinda drifted away from the community due to the all powerful pull of WoW, but I try to stay current with my favorite authors.

Once again, this is a wonderful new instalment in your story. so many unanswered questions that will doubtless be resolved or left hanging by the end of the story, so I won't pester you for it now. What you say is true, that you take up a lot of space with your descriptions, and that the plot does not move forward very quickly. However, I enjoy the depth that your stories always contain, and the visuals that my imagination conjures using your description is always worth it. Again, Danke Schoen.

Badass story hope u finish
MaKs

Awesome, Its so kickass that youre finishing this story.

I really enjoyed reading your story. The characters are well done, the story seems to get interesting and you have a nice balance between 'light' and 'dark' (as you called it). I am eager to read more :-) *thumbs up*

Enjoyable chapter. Nice writing and nice interaction between the characters. Good to have you back.

I've actually waited so long for this update! ^^ I'm glad it wasn't discontinued, its a great story concept, great chapter as of now some hidden past yet to be uncovered, semblance of romance, and just a great read. Please update soon!

This is an excellent story! Very in-depth and intriguing. Keep up the good work!

OMG I can't believe it. After all seemed lost. And not to mention the one story I actually wanted to see updated. Well, that and one other. Keep it up.

I was most pleasantly surprised when I found the email that you had posted once more. I had long feared that you would not return to continue your excellent stories. Glad to see that you are back.

As always, the chapter is excellent, many new aspects adding themselves. It looks like Rei may try to get Shinji's attention at some point in the future. I'm sure it would act as a catalyst to encourage Mana to proceed as fast as possible leading to all sorts of interesting mistakes.

Another interesting dynamic that sounds like it will be making an appearance is Shinji inadvertently taking the top spot in the class scholastically. That would certainly draw Asuka's attention real fast especially if it was by a large margin

Excellent,

brindani

Dear Otaku,

Yay an update, you've got your writing style man it's just about getting it done and in the end you do, that's more than most people can my friend.

What I like about this chapter honestly is that you gave some nice insight into Touji as a character beyond just the 'jock' really the guy needs more story stuff ya know?

Kowaru's characterization...hm interesting he doesn't seem like such a bad guy just a dude simply looking for love in his trysts, kind of foolish but hey he's trying.


Good so far, I like what you've done and the fact that you've given insight into how Yui dissapeared in this one.

Sincerely,

Konous the Grey

Very good so far, can't wait to see more of it. keep up the good work, can't wait to se what happens next.

you really should,nt be so ** you're self you write well it just takes along time for updates is all

It is good to see another high quality chapter for one of your outstanding stories.
You should really cut back on the self-criticism, your writing is fabulous, there is no need to talk it down.

I am very happy that you have decided to write again, as it would have been a shame to see some of the best stories around
never finished. And so, I hope to see more of them.
It's good that you are back.


Friendly greetings,
STEVE

I'm really glad that you aren't giving up on your storys. You are really one of the best Evangelion fanfiction writers around. I have reread this story at least 20 times and I'm glad to finally get a new chapter(it is a little short, but beggers can't be choosers). I really hope that future chapters will include some Asuka/Shinji interactions. Asuka/Shinji is my fav. pairing so I hope their is at least a little in this story. Keep it up and please get us another chapter soon!

Cenares Zabani

Very nice to see that you are still writing. The quality of the work is still spot on, even if it does seem to be a bit slow.

But, it's perfectly understandable, since you are in essence, creating a new setting and re-working characters in very fundamental ways. It's very fun to see.