I liked it very much. Sad and powerful. Very well written

Oh thats nice, thats really good. The imagery is nicely thought out and in my personal opinion I can get the sense that there is a possibility he can move on if once he gets over certain things. Truly a limbo setting.

My god, you took my breath away. Amazing, wonderful, splendid. And so sorrowful it leaves my soul weeping. Please, have you ever considered adding to this?

I envy you your creative talents.
Very well written, d continue to write so well.
And yes I liked it very much.

Haley

I am shocked. That was amazing!

*CLAPS LOUDLY*

I didn't think that anyone could ever capture Severus but you have done it!

Wow!

Very interesting. The only picky note I may make about it is that it isn't a drabble. Drabbles are a very strict form like a haiku for prose. They are exactly a hundred words with up to 15 more allowed for the title of the story. This would be classed as a short-short. Keep up the good work. Zafaran

Very nice and poetic. Deep. I like your imagery.

Poor Sev.

-Viskii

yes its very interesting. who's he talking about the screams and everything? im probably stupid for not knowing anyhow but you know.

Thats sad, dark, depressing, & angsty. I loved it! Was the emerald[s] part about Harry?

yeah, that sort of music can create this sort of stories in the mid's of a night. *smiles* This stands for second reading, it nearly needs it to figure out what it was all about. So as I see it, you write well and certainly interestingly. Sometimes I wonder what more there could be for him.

class :) I don't know what it is but the people here don't seem to fancy angst very much :'( ah well. I LOVE it!

I liked it AND it was interestingly written. I hope for better for him, but unfortunately I expect that he'll end up far worse. C'est la vie. Hope you'll take a look at my fics as well.