It's really beautiful! I've just read another fic of yours, Short days ago, I think it was, and I thought I had to look what else you've written.
I really like it, it's pretty angsty (well, that's what the genre should tell me ;)), and I really like the way you describe Parvati's feelings. You can exactly understand what she feels. And the pairing is really odd, never read of ParvatiPenelope before. Good idea!
Alraune

And if this isn't the best thing I've read in months I don't know what is. Wow.

Your writing is so descriptive, letting in all the tiny details that seem so significant to what you're trying to say. Parvati going through changes in her life, the sound of Penelope's name, Padma as the damsel waiting to be rescued -- these all seemed so perfect, and incredibly well-written. Plus, the thought of Parvati as a knight made my brain melt in the most pleasant way.

You mention other femmeslash on your Livejournal, but you don't say what your username is. I'd love to read more, really I would. :D