  WhiteCrow96 2008-09-19 . chapter 1 WILL YOU UPDATE ALREADY!? |
 Merkaba7734 2008-07-17 . chapter 1I really liked this fiction. You had me sad/worried through it. Poor repressed Alanna. Although the end was good. I like that Alanna wasn't completely the same as others. |
 Kyprish Prophetess 2008-04-11 . chapter 1IS she messing with Thom, or is it something else... |
 xxTunstall Chickxx 2008-04-05 . chapter 1Good job, update soon!
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx |
| dolly 2007-06-03 . chapter 1 OMG! Its so good u hav 2 write another chapter! Alanna a convent girl wut has d world come 2!? |
 I had a name but I forgot it 2006-08-30 . chapter 1this is really good
it was kinda weird but i loved the ending |
 Nay-Oh-Me 2006-02-12 . chapter 1wat on earth happened 2 alanna?!?!?! shes acting ridiculous! pleze make her act a bit more alanna-ish...and can u make it alanna/jon? like jon could catch her sneaking out to practice sword fighting early in the morning or sumthing...not very original i know but u dont have to take my advice! LOL ! please continue!!
-Tortal gal |
| Kiki Hsu 2005-08-16 . chapter 1 Update soon! |
| Kiki Hsu 2005-08-04 . chapter 1 Update soon! |
| Kiki Hsu 2005-08-01 . chapter 1 Good Story! Update soon! |
| Wingedrider 2005-04-05 . chapter 1 Soo...are you going to continue this or not?
You've got to!
It's actually pretty good! |
| mintchoc 2005-02-25 . chapter 1 I think that's a great way to end, with a cliffhanger. I also think that not updating sometime would be cruel and unusual. You've got our attention now, keep going! |
| Ethuiliel 2004-12-05 . chapter 1 tell me she has the same spirit or something, TELL ME THAT! I NEED TO HERE IT! |
| Halaia 2004-10-29 . chapter 1 Very short |
| MM 2004-10-24 . chapter 1 Hey this is a great story write more bye |
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