I love your story. I read it several months ago on another website and just wanted to let you know. So many stories tells the action of the story, the rescue. Hardly any tells the story what happens afterwards.

I'm not familiar with the original story, but I loved your story all the same! You have a gift for writing natural dialogue. I loved the bit where Clark's parents threatened to imitate an aeroplane!

That was awesome! That's the kind of story I just keep wanting more and more of...

It's nice to see a fic expressing the same feelings I've been having - in the 'Real World' Clark would be feeling pretty depressed about eveything- he's had a tough life. But not many seem to realize that.
Nice job.

lol, I loved that last part! MORE SOON, LIKE...NOW!

This is such a sweet story!
I have always loved the family interactions on the show and you write it so well in your story.
The aeroplane scene brought back some funny memories as well from my own childhood!
Looking forward to the next chapter.

I like this story. continue soon PLEASE. :)
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girdude. lover of all things gir. ;)

That's incredibly sweet. We don't get to see a lot of the Kents as a family unless there's trouble. It's nice to see someone tackling the behind the scenes portions - where the family has to deal with the fallout of life. I hope you write more soon.

fabulous story and I love how you manage to keep with the general tone of smallville while getting the post ending filled with the emotion that we dont get to see. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Aw! The Kents pulling the "airplane" trick on baby Clark, that's adorable. Poor kid doesn't even know what planet he's on, and here's these two strange adults doing something that makes no sense ... of course, that will become pretty much the story of his life, eh? And I hope Clark gets over the pink twit enough to someday say "hey, up yours, too, you self-centered little brat. Whine, whine, whine, when was the last time you took responsibility for your own actions?" / Ew. I could have done without the "meow" comment, though. Ew.

Aww!! ^_^; nicely done!
Sincerely, SimbiAni... luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!!