Really funny! Great work.

i didnt get the freyr's part ...

This is just awesome.

LOL! What a way to end that little bit of conversation. LMAO! Very good.

I absolutely love this story. Completely hilarious. I was bursting out laughing throughout it and kept getting weird looks from my roommates because of it. They probably think I'm completely insane now.

This is could probably be my new favourite short story of -all- time. Good job writting it, too.

Hearts'

Kirux

OMG! that was really funny! i love how they just keep going at the idea. i also love loki and heimdall little moment together (there are no words to describe how i felt). if only freyr were there... poor guy.

Oh "Bob"... That's sick... we're reading R&J right now too. o.o

XD! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I love this so much! Cracktastic! I really have an 'atraction' to LokixHeimdall so the fact that they said all that so nonchalantly was really funny!

Oh dear. I LOVED the last bit! XD

That is so friggin hilarious.

H ha ha ha ! Omg yOUR STORIES ARE SO GREAT!

Ahahahah, this is brilliant! Poor Freyr...A eunuch? Ouch.
Please write more soon!
firedraygon97

OMG that was so funny XD i burst out laughing. great job..

this is so funny! i almost burst out laughing in my office. hahaha