Very nice. I do feel a bit sorry for TK about what happened at the restraunt but it was better at the park anyway. This is a real romantic fanfic and I could kill the restraunt for giving away their reservation for being FIVE MINUTES LATE. Honesty. Again, a bit short, but all in all I liked it. Try to write a bit longer next time because it's too short and it ends too soon!

Too Cute! I always new that Takeru and Hikari should end up together. Only recently have I gotten back into writing and it was because my friend sent me a link to watch all the digimon episodes I wanted. The more and more I read and watch, the more I enjoy reading Takari's. I quite enjoed this story as much as Moonlight Pagoda.

The mistake where TK leaves the jewelry store in a forest green minivan and arrives at Kari's house in a green beetle has been fixed. Sorry about that!

SAPPINESS SAPPINESS SAPPINESS
There is no such thing as too much Takari I'm telling you...
Luved Moonlight Pagoda, luved this!

Aww! That was shu cute!
Only one thing I found wrong... First TK has a 'forest green minivan' then he has a 'green beetle' o_o; Thought I'd point that out for ya' Teeks *nuggies* >.>
*runs* Fwee.
±*~KeMaTa~*±

That's sweet, i like Takari but you know that i'm going to ask, Why isn't there any Taito!? ^_~
Maybe you should continue and write another story about their wedding!