That's just wrong, Onua and Lewa kissing, now I've seen it all. Bleh. XP

I diden't even Bother reading this I just wana say this right here and now. GAY ROMANCE IS JUST TO DAMN STUIPD! That'll be all

that was good *smircks* can't wait for your next story

It's official. Everything that I love has been shonen-ai'd. XD WOOHOO!

Seriously. I luff this. Tahu/Kopaka is not exactly the pairing I was thinking of, but it works! And it's just so much fun to fantasize about. XD

LOVE THIS!! There definitly needs to be more Bionicle slash, only one koro/metru has females after all. And Tahu/Kopaka, while they hate eachother, are HOT HOT HOT!

Some people are stupid, yaoi rocks, though its usually called slash when you're not talking about cartoons or anime

but all of them r buys exept gali i found this story rly weird especially since they r ll related i watched the first bionicle movie it

...whatever you say

A rather interesting story, I must say. And well-written, too. I can't find any glaring weaknesses in your story.

Tahu and Kopaka...who'd have thought? Heheh.

WOW. 0_o i loved it. for some reason i love reading boy/boy yaoi fanfics. i cant seem to write them myself, but oh well... there are awesome writers like you out there to write them for me! mwa ha ha ha ha! anywho this is a good one here. but, wouldn't Tahu, like, melt Kopaka if they, were, um, *you know*, because he's fire, and Kopaka's like, ice...? *ahem*

Hi. Im Burning-G. I usually respect all authers and thier ideas. but this is the last straw. Us ACTUAL fans respect bionicle and love it. Unlike you who discraces the name of bionicle by... Oh I cant even say it. you sicken me you know that? By just thinking of a plot that dosent even work, and rolling with it all because you have a sick fantasies about Boio-Mechanical yaoi. This is a sickening discrace to bionicle. you call you're self a fan? you dont deserve to be on authers like you make me question my sanity. It hurts you, and it hurts us. Get off until you can make a real fanfic *spits in your face*

sword it's a sword not a staff jeez! do you know anything about bionicle?! they hate each other! you are sick. it would have been so much better if you had all the boys compeating for gali, duh then she would have to pick one.

Ta-Loro huts don't have doors. They have holes. Only Le-Koro, Onu-Koro, Po-Koro, And Ga-Koro have doors. Onu-Koro and Po-Koro have Rocks to cover the holes. Le-Koro and Ga-Koro have leaves or plants to be doors. Ko-koro and Ta-Koro have no doors at all.

ARE YOU GAY!! This should have been a Gali kopaka fic but good format

you suck you really really suck