I know that this is four years after the fact, and you may not even get this review, but I was looking for something good to read with Torn in it, and decided to start from the last page on and work my way back. I found the fic to sate my craving in this.

I love what you've written here. Your attention to detail is great; a couple of things in particular that I liked were how you described Torn tromping through the Pumping Station, and how you gave him vertigo in the castle. They add a lot of depth even though they're such minute things.

Erol's delightfully insane in this. The fractured nature of your writing during his scenes works incredibly to build tension and you wrote just enough gore in there to get my imagination filling in the rest, without over-doing it.

Anyway, I'm glad I stumbled across this. It's a shame you didn't finish it; it was off to a great start!

Oh, how I wished you'd finish this great story, but I know you're past it now, seeing it's almost a year later. You truly are an excellent writer though. I just loved everything about this so much! If only I reviewed it earlier...Ok, this review isn't really going anywhere, so I'll tie it up. I'd just like to say that...I really do truly adore this story!

~Corad~

Whoo...nice story! Very well written...good characterization! I like it! Hope you'll continue it soon, it's made me very curious!

oh my gosh wow. I totally missed the updated last two chapters and wow. I am so loving the TornxAshelin conversations, they have me in stitches laughing. Great great great two chapters, I'm lovin this more and more and the Erol "inside thought" things are incerdible for this fic. let it be known that this is staying on my favorite stories list forever ^_^

Oh eheheheh! I love the convo Ashelin and Torn had! it's so cute (in a er...serious way ^_^)

wow... *from a safe distance* YOU SUCK, EROL! *a bullet whizzes by head) O_o... right. watching for next chapter!

lol, i loved torn's & ashelin's conversation

Hee hee, that was cute! I love how Torn and Ashelin interact with one another! :D I hope that more is forthcoming soon! ^_^

^_^ awesomeness! More chappies please!

Hyne, I've never read a piece like it. All the emotions are expressed amazingly well, and the characterisation is _perfect_. I can picture all of this, easily.
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...I'm putting this on my favourites.

I love this story so much! It's definately one of the best pieces of Jak&Daxter fanfiction I've ever read. Keep up the good work.
I love the way you write Erol's thoughts. Very true-to-character, spot on.
Oh, and of course you can use some ideas from my story!! ^^;
Looking forward to reading more :)

COOL! I missed the update and decided to check and there was a new chapter and YAY! It's so dark and twisted and dark and awesome... *clings* There must be more! Soon!

Wow... your writing style is very dramatci - and it capture's Erol's insanity perfectly. Keep it up!

This is extremely dark, exciting, and detailed. I love it! ;)

This story is fantastically well written with simply awesome characterization. It also happens to be one of the most intense and compelling fic’s I've ever read, full of dark emotion. Amazing! I'm lovin' it. Hope to see another update soon!
--MsImp