Awesome chapter! I loved it so much. Keep up the brilliant work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next :-D

This is an amazing story please keep writing. it allows the charactors to breathe and develop into their own rather than just how they affect Harry's life (or Siri's)
Thanks for writing

Severus' power continues to manifest itself in more ways! He just "thought" into existence a "Marauder's Map" of the towns they are preparing to defend from the Death Eaters. Nice!

I'm trying to think what Sirius meant when he told Severus and Remus that Peter was the reason he needed saving in the first place. Could he have been refering to the fact that what Peter had done that led to James'and Lily's deaths was the reason his magic had been deminished for years?

Whatever the reason, it was good that they made their piece before Peter died.

Good chapter!
Beth

I have loved your story from the beginning! The character developement is superb, and the plot is so original. I can't think of another fic like this one, at all. Well done.
Beth

Yay! A new chapter! And great ones too. Can't way to see the way this proceeds...Hope to see it soon!

REmus said he didn't have any jewelry for SOnya, but in chap 46 he had gave her bonding bracelets for Christmas

great chapter!

Well done.

I really liked how Sev explained to Juno why he continues to care and continues to fight. I could just imagine the passion in his voice and eyes as he explained it.

Oh, I REALLY liked that encounter between Narcissa and Dr. Granger. It's about time someone put her in her place. We really needed a little comic-relief. Thank you for that. -grin-

I am a little curious about the animated maps – When Sev was looking at one of his maps and wishing it were like the Marauders’ Map – did wish magic make it so, or was it already like the Marauders’ map. I’m thinking it happened the way Sev’s unpredictable apparation happens … you know, the way he'll think about Albus and suddenly he'll be in Albus’ office …

Aw ... how sweet. Remus proposed - at last. I liked that, and that Sonya accepted his proposal. I d hope they survive the battles and all that's to come and can get married and raise lots of little Lupins.

LOL -- Hermione reminded me of Molly, wanting to prepare food for the troops, as it were.

Okay -- you made me cry.! I'm not a happy camper. I HATE to cry.! Although, I've known for a long time that Peter would die, I wasn't ready for that. You did it well, but damn, I had really hoped that it wouldn't happen. -sigh- I am curious about Sirius' statement that Peter was the reason he'd needed saving in the first place.

Anyway -- I quite enjoyed the chapter. I especially liked that you didn't do a blow-by-bow accounting of the fight.

Looking forward to more.

Thank you.

Poor Severus. Please update soon.

You love to leave your stoies like that. What I mean is..."WHAT THE HELL IS SIRIUS TALKING ABOUT?" I love it. Please update soon soo I do not have to keep asking this question. LOL LOL LOL LOL.
Awesome chapter.

I loved it, but I was actually sorta sad when Peter died =/

It feels weird for a lot of people to be wanting to move out. I guess a part of me always thought that they'd always live together forever, but it is a good idea.

You've done wonderfully yet again and I still can't wait for more!

Oh dear. Sirius is definitely going to have a hard time getting over Peter. That's obvious from the last bit of Sirius's dialogue this chapter. He's confused about his feelings toward Peter, guilty for not forgiving him sooner, confused by those feelings of guilt probably. Let's see how he's going to cope with this. This chapter is very good. I love Remus and Sonya's engagement, and Mr. Granger's yanking Narcissa off her high horse. I can't wait for the next chapter! They are all so good! =)

Just started to read your story. I like it so far. Wonder what you have in store for the Dursley. Well the story is calling my name. Great start.

wow, i'm only on chapter 12 and i love your story! i think that Juno is one of the best OCs i've ever read about!

Update soon!

I sent you a PM about Ginny's eyes, hope you received it. Also, I have a suggestion. How about bringing Tonks into the mix? Have you thought about it?