I loved your story!! So original and very creative! And it's so cute! Continue to write more!

A few suggestions
Naraku should be man in the mirror
And Shessomaru could be Kikyou's hunter
It'd be much better.

i think it was very cute ! great job ,keep up the good work !

Another awesome story! Bravo! Short and sweet. Arigato for the snow white parody! Ja ne!