Again, another brilliant story. I liked it when you gave Sonic the impression that Kintobor died in that explosion, and Robotnik was born, saying that he killed Kintobor. We all know that Ovi changed into Ivo, but in a way, Robotnik did kill Kintobor. A bit like in Star Wars when Obi-Wan said that Darth Vader killed Anakin Skywalker, when in fact Vader is Anakin, only evil. You get my point really. 10/10.

I could ~*finally*~ read this chapter! Dark, your writing is both amazing and beautiful. DOn't ever let go of that dream, nomatter what life throws at you. Love the story, and luck of Meneiki, babe.

Have you ever read the Sonic: The Hedgehog comic books? though your storyling deviates greatly from the storline there, I am impressed with your determination and resolve to write out your ideas.
That's just me - I was a Sonic comic freak. I'll be reading more of this later. ^_^

that was a good chapter really fir in with issue 6 of sonic the comic, still the ovi kintobor story not your verison but stc's noe isn't that good is it i mean how he becomes robotnik

Ah dude, that was great. I liked the hero bit at the end... And the water bit, genius. I laughed, yay.

Aw, poor little Sonic! *cuddles doll* I really like this sotyr, and how you tied it in with Shadow, and the whole series all together. You also answered some questions that needed answering. This is a really good story. Do you plan to continue it? *favs*

good start to the story so basically sonic and shadow are 50 but since they've been in suspended animation they have the look of 16 years old this story is good i can't wait for the next chapters

Wow, this story so fit’s in with the STC storyline, well at lest I think it does.

Good fic so far.Hope you update it soon.Ja.