Wow, let me tell you that this has been one of my favorite stories for a LONG time! I actually found it when I was on a friend's computer one day, and I didn't have an account at the time. Now that I've found this wonderful story again (I couldn't for the life of me remember the title!), it has been immediately added to my favorites so I cannot lose it again! I applaud not only your idea, but your elegance and choice of diction. You even managed to make a rape scene elegant... something I have rarely (if ever) seen done before. Keep writing, you have a real talent!

I really liked the parallel between Kurama and the fish in the fourth chapter... ^.^ And it was a very cute ending.

THIS STORY WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME AND KICK **! I liked it a lot! So... you're a dumb bird? XD I joke. Anyway, this was a good story, despite being so short. Props and cupcakes!
=^.^=

Oh my dear lord. And that's something coming from someone who doesn't believe in a lord... O.O Your writing style is beautiful. I liked the entire thing. (Does that make me a bad person? Oh well.) It was deplorable, but I liked it all anyway. -smiles- It was the **! XD (yes, I had to throw in a ** comment for myself... -_-;)

that was bootyful!
ASOTA

Woo! I wasn't sure how Hiei was going to make it out alive!
Best four shot (lol) that i've ever read! Congrats! I loved it!

Oh God...
is..is a great fic!
you're the best!

This is one of my favorite fics!!
this is so sad...and...Tsurenai ¬¬ bastard! I hate him!! hn...
TOT ow...poor kurama...
This make me cry, rilly...
and...I hope you write more histories as this...

Bye!!

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Wow, very nicely written, and wonderful plot... I suppose I'm one of those sick ** you mentioned, lol.

Jesus Christ. *falls out of chair and dies* Read all this in one sitting... and now I feel quite tempted to read it again. o.o But this has got to be one of the best, thought out fics I've ever read. You have a very admirable writing style... and I just love it. *bows* God bless your talent, Green Bird, God bless.

I loved it. Thank you.

wow. at this moment i can't think of anything else but wow. that was really good. besides he deserved it. poor Youko. all caged up like that. :(

I like it.It was a little confusing at the beginning of this chapter but it was good though I wished it was longer

Ha, I thought he might bite him in the end. ^ ^
I read this a while back but it hadn't been finished. =P
Glad that it is now. I thuroughlly enjoyed it.
Guess I'm a sick bastard too XP

That was a great story! I really enjoyed reading it. You're a great writer!

It does just end. Maybe but there was a lot of love between those two. I don't know maybe you could write another fic to follow up on the story but you are the writer and well that is up to you.

Loved the fic. I praise those who can write yaoi. I just can't do it.