I am just blown away by this entire story. It was so original and so unexpected - I love this look at the Shitennou! Their backstory, in particular, was completely different from anything else I've ever read, and I really liked the way everything tied together, from Zoisite saving Beryl as a child, to the reason they were first born as humans, and Zoisite's decision to return.

Your characterisations are spot on and I love the Shitennou interaction. Zoisite especially was so wrenchingly *real* I honestly broke down more than once. He isn't as strong as Sailormoon, but then, who is really? The fact that he loved Kunzite enough to want to return to earth, and the fact that in the end, he *did* try to do what he could - aah, I don't think I can really say how deeply his story touched me. It was beautiful and terrible and very, very well-written.

I wish I'd been able to follow this as it was written, but I'm glad to have found it, however late. ^_^; Thank you so much for sharing this, it's one of the best Sailormoon pieces I've seen!

Just great! I couldn't stop reading until I reached the last chapter. The Shitennou were amazing! I loved the way you depicted them all, mainly Jadeite's behavior, and Zoisite's cowardice. And Jadeite/Hotaru... Lovely! Lovely, lovely and lovely! Congratulations for such a wonderful fic! Added to my Favorites!

;.; beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Hi, sorry, the reason I made the previous comment was because I was planning to give a review for every chapter so that you would have more reviews =D - someone needs to support Zoicite/Kunzite fics after all! However, I had to stop reading and get on with my real life as a uni student (I'm up to my seventh high distinction this semester!).

So sorry, I know on it's own it was a bizarre critique and I will eventually have time to read the entire fic, as I was planning to leave the proper critique until the end!

However, for now I'd like to say please, please, please do continue writing Zoicite/Kunzite, because it's so rare to find any good works, and yours is definitely the best, particularly Fire and Ice (although I didn't like the ending, seemed nonsensical to me). So keep up the good work and I will be watching out for you!

His pleas fell on death ears = "deaf ears"

Ah, so much I wish to see all the history a day... and this happen!!

I really like the end... well, maybe a little desappointed... but is logic I have a idea and you have other one... a good idea, I have to admit...

I really loved reading all this time... chapther after chapther...

All the time was worth...

Once again, I must say that this fic is very excellent. However, I must also again say that there were spelling errors riddled throughout the fic. Unfortunately, most the errors would not be picked up by a spell checker because most were actual words, just not the correct ones. Other than that one thing, though, this has been a most enjoyable fic and I am glad to have read it.

Very interesting so far. Other than a few spelling errors this story is one of the best I've read.

That was a powerful story right to the ending. Great job!

What a perfectly satisfying ending. Thank you so much for a wonderful read. I've really enjoyed this

I really loved this story, and it ended beautifully. Thank you so much for writing it.

Thank you! For this amazing story, it has to be the best story I EVER read. It had so much feeling in it, so much depth and it really captured the essence of Sailor Moon. The ending was absolutely perfect, this last chapter not only lived up to the rest but it made all the pieces fall together so logically and brought a wonderful sense of closure.
I can't think of enough praise for this story, so I'll just thank you again for taking the time to write it and share it with us!
Hugs!
Myosotis

Sugoi! (I hope I said that right)*tosses you a Zoycite plushie* Usagi-chan's back too! For a minute I thought she might have stayed gone. I'm a little confused about Eternal and Usagi but I'll just assume it's kind of like Usagi and Serenity. And Beryl got a happy ending *grins* Wow, this is probably the one fic I've read where that happens and she isn't a complete *insert word here*! You did a great job! Hope to see more stuff from you soon. Good luck, whatever you decide to do.



Remember to smile cuz' Jesus loves you!~Merry Christmas

I enjoyed this chapter a lot. You've finally hit the climax, and what an ending it is. I loved the part with Zoisite arguing over Beryl about love. It was a great piece of dialogue. Also, your inner battles will Zoisite are always appriciated because they are so convincing.

Wow, I loved it, what a wonderful story of Zoisite's past!! So original and enthralling! I really enjoyed the talks between Zocho and the Master...they were so real and easy to picture! You really know how to write, this is great quality writing, I don't think I've seen fanfics this good very often:)!
Now, on the other hand, not resolving the cliffhanger in the last chapter is cheating! I'm dying to know how the battle turns out...! Well, guess I'll hav to wait for the next update, it'll certainly be worth it:)
Thanks for the beautiful story!
Myosotis