 Maddiecake 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Wow...
Aw man... Race died... and you almost made me cry.
Almost. :] |
 Sprints 100 2005-08-24 . chapter 1*gasp*!
This was.. is.. so.. emotional, and beautiful in a terrible, devastating way. I loved it.. truly.
You seem very talented.. I'm going to have to go check out some of your other stories.
Just.. wow. I don't even know what to say. And then I feel bad because this isn't getting the praise it deserves.
Wonderful job. This fic's gonna make me cry.
-Sprints |
 rumor 2004-02-18 . chapter 1Ah...you killed RACE?! Meh. But he's too cool! *grumbles* I knew that damn gambling'd get him in trouble someday. *glares at Race*
Very moving scene, and Blink and Mush afterwards...
How sad...the Muskateers have been disbanded. :(
Wonderful story! XD |
 Crunch 2004-02-17 . chapter 1Bit angsty, yeah. But just as brilliant as always... you never EVER shy away from unpleasant details in your fics, and it's part of what makes you great. I love this, Neri! I love the emotion, and the matter-of-fact lines like "he died.", and that litle bit of hope at the end. all in all, brilliant. Another! Another, I say! *bangs fork on tabletop*
*Crunch* |
 kitty-mella 2004-02-06 . chapter 1 oh wow that was beautiful... mush is beautiful. racetrack is beautiful. man what'm i saying? newsies is beautiful. *tear. |
 Queen Kez the Wicked 2004-02-06 . chapter 1oh my.
coolest concept -ever- the last bet piece.
-shudder- fantastic descriptions, made me wince with almost every sentence, man! absolutely lovely, as usual.
love! -kezzles |
 Liams Kitten 2004-01-27 . chapter 1This was...great. I love it. It's so sad...god, and I'm listening to a sad song...I'm gonna start crying, haha. I really love it.
Much love,
~Liams Kitten~ |
 Braids21 2004-01-25 . chapter 1Woah, that was REALLY good
~Braids |
 Angel St. Mathew 2004-01-22 . chapter 1wow, that was crushing. I mean, not crushing as in "man this story sucks", but crushing as in...well, you know. Wow. Very descriptive and great narrative from Mush's point of view. Bravo to you! |
 SamiisLove 2004-01-20 . chapter 1I can honestly say that after i read this, i felt tears slide down my cheek. Maybe because I'm reading this sad story and listening to My Immortal (Evanescence) but who cares. This was very touching and I hope I read more from you.
SaMi!~ |
 flare 2004-01-18 . chapter 1 omg! "Stripped" is so sad! how do u write that, its so good! (i hope its nothing personal against race tho, he's the bomb) that stoy is amazing...u should write more.
~flare |
 Seraph2 2004-01-18 . chapter 1Wow. I never thought about how dangerous Race's gambling addiction could be. I really liked the slight Mush/Blink at the end.
~Seraph the Second |