excellent writing, excellent writer

I liked this. Poor, stupid, gung-ho Paige, can't ever catch a break, not even in fanfic. Well done.

Great stuff. I love this show!

o you're the first Line Of Fire fic :) Loved the plot and the story. Great character insights, action, and conflict!

I'm so glad to finally see some Line of Fire fanfic! Keep up the good work!