 Ginny278 2006-08-20 . chapter 2I wonder how Jason knows Dallas? Hm?? Great Story Luv it! |
 Seul Desir 2005-06-01 . chapter 6I really liked this fic! (I know that you've read some of mine, so I decided to return the favor!) I was rooting for Dallas and Kip, but the ending is still sweet. I wish you'd reconsider the length of the story and make it more dramatic. i.e.: Dallas discovering that she has deeper feelings for Kip. Just a thought! I truly enjoyed your story, and I'm amazed that it held my attention (as you can see, I haven't even updated any of my own fics in a long time.) Anyway, great job! |
 Elven-Princess Ginny 2004-11-29 . chapter 6wow... what a cute ending! I still wanted Kip and Dallas to end up together though... but Jason's gotten better, I think. Too bad it's over though... Nice job!
~Ginny |
 Elven-Princess Ginny 2004-11-29 . chapter 5I knew she was going to get on the train. Jason tends to stir up trouble around ex-boosters. Poor Kip... I wish Dallas would go with him instead of Jason.
~Ginny |
 Elven-Princess Ginny 2004-11-29 . chapter 4*gags* Jason... gr. I wanted Dallas to end up with Kip! They're such a cute couple! And she cares about him soo much... and vice versa. I'm so happy Kip's awake!
~Ginny |
 Elven-Princess Ginny 2004-11-29 . chapter 3omg Kip... what a sin... I don't like Drycoff. It's not how you describe him, though, I've just never him... poor Tumbler though. He must feel so bad, you know?
~Ginny |
 Elven-Princess Ginny 2004-11-29 . chapter 2oh no... it was such a fun, upbeat chapter til the crash. Johnny B deserved to die. All he does is cause trouble for everybody.
~Ginny |
 Elven-Princess Ginny 2004-11-29 . chapter 1omg Kip's so sweet! It's wierd but I can't actually see the characters acting like they do in your fic...
~Ginny |
 bi-dom-girl 2004-05-23 . chapter 6Really loved the story. |
 Iyone 2004-03-08 . chapter 6YAY! New story coming up!
Good chappie! Nicely wrapped up everything thought i wanted Kip to win :P Oh well! You are the Queen of Faeries and if i defy you i shall be punished! HEE HEE!
Um... rite... SO! I like the "you're smarter than you look" comment! Really made it funny!
ME READ NEW STORY NOW!
MWHAHAHA!
PS. The Tybalt story did NOT suck! Just cuz ppl can't appreaciate ur work don't mean it's trash, it's means i'm trash! LOL! WOW! I'm weird! gtg or i'll kill myself with all this! |
 astroz0mbies 2004-03-05 . chapter 5It's Rachel, we're in Com Tech! And so your absolutly, positively, undoubtably, God allmightly sure Kip and Dallas aren't gettin together cuz somptin' be goin' on witb them...Ya see ya lata!
~^-^~ |
 Iyone 2004-02-25 . chapter 5I KNEW SHE WAS GOING TO GO ON THE TRAIN! YAY!
Oh no! Is this near the end of the story? NO! plz say no! *Sigh* okie then,it was a good chappie. It really did feel like her feelings were conflicting inside her. It was very good!
NOW hop to it soldier! write the next chappie!
LOL! |
 Iyone 2004-02-20 . chapter 4WOW! i thought she liked Kip... guess not!
The swicth between them talking and playing the piano/singing was sorta unclear, but MEH!
You know what i was thinking while i was reading the last part? I would never be able to kiss a guy if my friend was in the hospital... but that's just me.
Nice twist. I honestly thought she liked Kip |
 Anon-ee-mouse 2004-01-29 . chapter 4 WHOO! he's awake! i want more! |
 Kittahh 2004-01-24 . chapter 3"It's all fun and games till someone looses and eye." Toby smiled. [chapter 2]
man that creased me up laughing! this is a very good story...lovin' the Jason/Dallas history there...please update soon, hun!! |