AWESOME! WRITE MORE NOW

So far i like it but it sounds a bit like one i read latey by diety of sorrow and ssjfreakazoid, wrote as of late. anywho good luck on your fic.

Glad to see your not using as much of the neo eva idea anymore...
i personally don't care as much as dietyof sorrow if you use the neo evangelion concept, but it would have been nice if you had at least mention us. and don't tell me you came up with the idea all by yourself cause our fic was up before yours and some of the details were to much like ours to be completely original. stuff like eva size, the fact they were based on unit etc, but so far your story seems to be pretty good apart from some minor mistakes. if you'd like i could pre-read them for you, but that's only if you would like, anyway, i'm rabbling so good luck with the story. let me know by e-mail if you would letme pre-read, it's on my profile.

i dont relly care if u make rei ooc to be quite onest i absalotly hate rei/shinji fics but ime not saying that i hate rei

cool and eva 07 but shouldnt theare be an eva o6
cuz i know for sure there is an eva 05 because i
got to see the screen shots of the next eva movie thats coming out 2006 i got them from one of my friends at school and u want to see them just give me a email

Yeah right, that's original. The Neo Eva concept belongs to SSjfreakazoid and myself.. the name belongs to SSj, not me. So I'll be damned if it's original.
SSj: As will I

Hey Peach, update more often. You have a pretty good story going on here, and I would like to read more of it. Just do me two favors when you update: Don't forget about Rei as so many authors tend to do, and don't make Rei OOC. You are good right now, but don't forget about everyone's favorite blue-haird albino.

YoU DIDN'T ANSWER MY QUESTION! I NEED AN ANSWER!

Where did you get the idea for this fic? I saw the Neo Eva in a story by Deity of Sorrow, and his was published before yours. Not meaning to be rude, but could you tell me?
Angel

good job, keep writing!

Hey, not bad at all! Short, but my radar detected few to no grammatic or spelling errors. I like it, can't tell yet if the idea is original or not but it seems good, update soon.

A nice start ... but thats all a start.
you haven't got enough toi say good or bad so we'll see how it goes with the next chapter. Oh and where is this set in the storyline?
dennisud

Quite interesting.Please update soon.