Yay, i love this story. I'm in a 'toad' sort of mood at the moment, no idea why.

This is really good, just one thing though, the thirsd chapter the line spacing is a bit wierd. Makes it a little hard to read, especially as its mostly karate stuff.

Other than that, keep writing it. Please?

Loved it so far. When are you continuing the fic series w/ Gabby?

Good fic, please keep updating. :3

Wow, just wow. You have created a work of art here. It's absolutely beautiful. I love movie!Toad, but this takes the cake. Poor, poor abused Mort. There just aren't enough stories about him. (Actually, do you know any more, besides 'The Big Brotherhood Program'?)
You draw, too? Do you have any art up on the internet? Where?
Again, I just love this story.

WOW...when you gonna update?
those blasted monks-er-whatever they are..letting the littlebrats beat up my poor little Morty..>sniff.sob..Oh,the inhumanity!!<

ToadIsMineToadIsMineToadIsMineToadIsMine..>que manicle laughter

I love you so, please sir, may I have some more? MORE! Baby Toady...oh poor tortured baby toady.

YAY! I love this story! keep writing!

Please continue. I like. Poor Mortie!

I like it! Please continue. I like Felix, too.

*sniffle* poor little Mort. The end of that chapter had me in tears. I love this story. You've done excellent job with it so far and you depict everything perfectly. I wish I could throw those boys from the top of a building. How dare they hurt Mort!? Grr on them. Please, please, please update soon.

wow,this story is amazing..IM BEGGING YOU TO UPDATE SOON!

I'm glad Mort's been bugging you! :) Update again soon

That was an excellent chapter! I can't wait for Toad to get his revenge or something on the kids...r...Update soon!

Kernl Out

NARGH! Where's the rest of it?

I mean... your sketches at DeviantArt kinda implied there was more than just this lot in the fic. O please, *please* tell me you've just given up posting or have more of it elsewhere?

...must... have... *MORE*

ahem.

ObPlug: I'm working on my own Toad-back-from-the-dead Movieverse fic on my site [You may have to look up my bio. FFN doesn't like it when you post URLs anywhere :P Just in case they're letting 'em in again... ?showtopic=2381 And if you cant see a URL, FFN's done it to me again. Feh. Go to my site, in the Bulletin Board's Fanficcery section and look for a thread entitled _Flotsam_ :D ] and would love to see what you reckon of it.

Haven't gone as far as supplying Toad's backstory, so I *might* pinch yours. With permission, of course. I like cross-infecting continuity :D

[Ohyeah. I'm not fooling myself... having you post a few pics wouldn't hurt either. Lovelove*LOVE* your work. All nummy and delish ^_^ ]

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. Enough inspiration for me to reconsider the Martial Arts... But hey, more storry?!