you reallly need a sequel to this one

Aw! Kaiba and his little tsundere tendencies! And Jou's quick trip into insanity is just! I love this. In the end, Mokuba controls all. I call it Puppeteer!Mokie.

Great story! But now I want some ice cream! In friggin' DECEMBER! End soon winter!

hi thr is thr a sequal to this?

I agree with toki You Are A TEEEAAAZZZEE! Eviiiilllll!

D'aw, I love Mokuba in this! Little sneak, he is DEFINITELY playing matchmaker for his brother with Jou- and he is really good at it too! Again, I applaud how well you got into the characters heads, and bravo for your portrayal of such an ADORABLE little sneak in the form of Mokuba!

Thank you for sharing this story!

-dark kitten

Attraction is such a funny thing.

Nuuoh! I wanna bother sequel! *pouts* ur like the king of tease.

Hehe, this one made me laugh so much!

Haha XD I loved that. Very cute, realistic (character wise) and not to mention how we can all empathize with Joeys cackling laughter .

But yea great .

Loved the Mokauba ending btw!

This story was really interesting from the beginning to the end. I loved the way it was written. Seto and Jou make a great couple. Too bad we don't see what Jou will do to flirt with Seto Kaiba.

An original take on the typical Seto and Joey meet in the park...

I love love LOVE it!

is there a second part?

Amusing! I like when Joey gets the upperhand (even if only in his head D )

And of course, whats not to love about all-knowing Mokuba?

*grin* Cute.

OMG, that was TOO good I absolutely loved it! Of course I would love to see what happens on Monday... but since that's probably not going to happen, it was still such a fun read!

PS. At one point when it says "Mokuba joined in the laughter, having interrupted Jounouchi's comment as a joke on his brother’s unfriendliness," did you mean 'interpreted'? Maybe a spell check misunderstood the sense of the sentence or something.

Anyway, once again, that was fabulous!